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eijentu

This Ain't Brokeback

Sep 26, 2011 20:15

Title: This Ain’t Brokeback
Series: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle
Rating: R-18 (NSFW)

Summary: Written for this prompt over at clampkink. Kurogane has been in the acting game long enough to see through most people, but his co-star is proving a distraction. Kurogane/Fay modern AU.

( This Ain’t Brokeback )

animefic, clamp, fic, kurofai

Comments 19

uakari120 September 26 2011, 15:06:59 UTC

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~~~

IT WAS YOU~~~~~~~~~

You have no idea how happy this makes me. I LOVED this fic. (And may have been pressing your buttons on the meme to get you to deanon... >.>)

*flails properly at you*

Oooooh I hope you plan to write more~

eijentu September 27 2011, 00:37:44 UTC

Ahahahaha, so that was you! XD *glomps you for giving me the courage to deanon* Thank you so much, and I'm so glad (read: totally amazed and thrilled) that you liked it! <3 You have no idea how happy that makes me!

May deanon more once flailing subsides

uakari120 September 27 2011, 04:10:12 UTC

Ehehe - yes, I do enjoy poking people (especially when I NEEEEED to know who wrote this beautiful piece of crack/smut <3).

/throws more courage at you - your writing is awesome~

eijentu September 27 2011, 10:25:22 UTC

Wow, thank you again, honestly. That's just so lovely of you! <3 (And if, at some later point, the sun fades from your view, you'll know my whacking great head has officially expanded to planetary proportions.) XD

*grabs armfuls of courage and stashes it away for a rainy day*

konnichipuu September 27 2011, 02:00:43 UTC

OMG, MARRY ME!!! *______________* /GLOMPS YOU FOREVER

THIS WAS UTTERLY FANTASTIC! THE UST, YUUKO AS THE DIRECTOR, KUROGANE WITH MAKEUP ALL OVER HIS THIGHS - I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO WORD MY ETERNAL GLEE OVER THIS WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL FIC! EEEEEEEEE! *incoherent capslocking*

*catches breath and tries to stop flailing*

Honestly, really, I LOVE THIS!! Watanuki and Doumeki are lovely in their small roles, and Yuuko, who of course is the root of all shenanigans, was fantastic! I LOVED the UST during the shooting, AND THEN THE PORN, AMG! (Woman, you trying to kill me? :D) But beside the wonderful, hot sex, the general chemistry between Kurogane and Fai was pretty much perfect! It hit me as very much THEM how Kurogane was trying desperately to gain some sense of normalcy, while Fai was being evasive - and I loved how Kurogane slowly realized that they're both attracted to each other, and the whole business leading to distinctly unprofessional kissing. Really, Honestly. The unprofessional kissing must have been my favorite part of this ( ... )

eijentu September 27 2011, 10:33:22 UTC

OMG! *glomps you, then flails and dies* :DD Thank you so much!! Am so glad you liked it! And, hee, I feel like (unprofessional) kissing should be encouraged at every oportunity with these two as well as everything else. XD

Um, um, god, am just flailing here after reading such kind words! Thank you, this just left me feeling warm and fuzzy and totally made my evening! <3 <3 <3

(*is still totally flailing*)

faren_maddox September 27 2011, 04:33:28 UTC

Wow, this is really wonderful! You did a superb job of putting me on the movie set, with the lingo and the lingering feeling of irritation over the whole thing, especially with all the makeup being put onto his thighs. *grin* That was one of my favourite things, just how detailed the setting was and how annoying Kurogane seemed to find it.

Of course, the ridiculous level of sexual tension was also quite good. It's hard to convey tension like that when the characters aren't saying a word to each other, and you did a great job! Also, the kissing. *0* Yeah, it's just a job, alright....

Great sex scene, great dialogue, and great little cameos from Doumeki and Watanuki. And Tomoyo being meddlesome. <3 Officially awesome!

eijentu September 27 2011, 10:37:07 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! That's incredibly nice of you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it (and my head is rapidly expanding here!) But I have to admit I'm a filthy cheater on a lot of the set details - was a film student in a past life. :)

Ahaha, though I have no idea why he'd need quite so much make-up on his thighs they always look pretty good to me. :D

faren_maddox September 28 2011, 17:20:10 UTC

I definitely noticed that there was at least heavy amounts of research, and I'd wondered if you were in the industry in some way. ;)

.... *goes back to flailing with joy over this fic*

fieldofclover September 27 2011, 08:05:34 UTC

Okay. Okay. I've read this three times, and I think I can come up with a coherent response now beyond the obligatory fangirling keysmash- though by god it's hard, I just want to flail all over this place over this.

You know how everyone is saying the tension in this is amazing? That's because it is. It's gorgeous, you could scoop it up with a spoon.

I love all those fantastic details you put in about working on set, all the names, titles, and so forth; it really made me feel like I was there. (And don't even get me started on the DouWata cameo XD)

The sex was enough to make me blush and wish I wasn't reading it in class- not because it was bad, but because I had to read quickly and keep checking over my shoulder to make sure no one was watching. It's also part of the reason I had to go back and read it again (and again) when I got home <3 t just seemed to flow so well from all that tension and unf, it was really sexy ( ... )

eijentu September 27 2011, 10:46:12 UTC

Gosh, thank you so much! I don't even know what to say, but I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D *is flailing quite a lot*

Ha, ha, and I take my hat off to you completely for being able to read fanfic in class! A couple of weeks ago I checked my email (with all the kinkmeme notifiers!) during my lunch break at work, then my boss asked me to go do something and I left it open at my computer while I walked away! *facepalm*

Although the Google ads for that account crack me up. I keep on being offered genuine Subaru parts and various things to do with eye care... o__o

fieldofclover September 27 2011, 23:56:15 UTC

*flails right back at you*

Well, that's what you do in class right? :D Actually, it's pretty good, because I have my own lappy and I sit right at the back... though I have been caught writing porn in class -.-;; I minimised the screen before my tutor could actually see anything but still. Close call. *wipes sweat off brow*

*dies laughing* Ah, inappropriately appropriate ads, eh? XD

mikkeneko September 27 2011, 10:25:03 UTC

I love this! Ah, it was so well written, and such awesomely typical Kurogane (even though he was only a Kurogane-actor) that the whole thing just flowed right together.

I laughed out loud, actually, at Watanuki the AD. Oh, the only way that Yuuko could make his life any more ridiculous. :D

eijentu September 27 2011, 10:51:42 UTC

Yeek! Thank you so much! Gosh, I really love the way you write Kurogane, so I'm so pleased you liked it. <3

Hee, and I think coordinating simulated porn and carrying drinks and working with Doumeki = a hat trick for Yuuko. :D