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Apr 11, 2011 20:03

Title: Woke up new
Pairing: Ohno/Nino
Rating: Pg
Disclaimer: Do not own
Summary: it was a long time coming, but it happens. Ohno and Nino wake up in their own beds alone, for the first time in years and reflect on what being free really means.
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nino/ohno, !fic

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hwlinyitw April 11 2011, 13:32:15 UTC
Oh my, this is how Ohmiya should be written so, so beautiful. I love everything about this, it isn't overly dramatic and the pacing is perfect, or so I think.

Among the may things I loved this bit is probably one of my favorites:

Nino was miserable then. But never lonely.

He's not miserable now, but he's never felt so alone.

Thank you for sharing <3

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ninethreeeleven April 16 2011, 13:38:58 UTC
thank you for reading!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it♥

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plueonigiri April 11 2011, 13:53:17 UTC
my heart D: it's all broken into pieces and the last three lines just hit me.

in a very very good way of course.

so very well-written ;w;

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ninethreeeleven April 16 2011, 13:39:20 UTC
thank you for reading bb~
I'm glad you enjoyed it♥

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i_am_zan April 11 2011, 15:35:48 UTC
So wonderfully sad and heartbreaking ... go you for donating your efforts towards the fundraiser.

I thought I might share with you ... because I think you might like the third one it's a little the same and a little different.

^_^ I read this and it reminded me that once upon a long ago I dabbled.

Thank you for the reminiscences. ^_^ Lachrymose and melancholic.

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ninethreeeleven April 16 2011, 13:41:48 UTC
sdjdsjkdjks, so late, but thank you for the link; so pretty and I've probably read it ages ago when i was still a creepy lurker.
I'm glad you enjoyed it♥

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chocoxchips April 11 2011, 17:41:31 UTC
That was beautiful =]
This made me fall in love with Ohmiya all over again xD

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ninethreeeleven April 16 2011, 13:41:57 UTC
thank you for reading!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it♥

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crystallino358 April 11 2011, 18:00:41 UTC
Are they together in the end..? (Sorry.. My brain can't understand the last part well. But I want them to be together... XP)

Anyway... This is so sweet...

Thank you for sharing..

Q(^^)m

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ninethreeeleven April 16 2011, 13:42:37 UTC
I'm not really sure either :) it's up to your interpretation!
thank you for reading!

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