creative to date, still has a few holes to connect, but i'm happy with it over all
“Enough” Joseph cried out “All of you home, now!” His hand waved in a simple half arch gesture and the three remaining found themselves forced out of the anomaly castle. Carrie no novice caster audibly gasped at Joseph’s perceived anger and how easily he forced the rest of the group back to the temple. Prom groaned and forced his will against
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we are satisfied with it...just remember, if the story continued at all, Joseph would say "Surrender" to the monster. overall, it was awesome tho. Mal is pouting saying her monster aren't that cool or well-described.
I wish you'd write the rest. DUDE.
will you? *sparkly eyes*
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