push, drown (02/03)

[dystopialights]

push, drown
minsu, jaesu (eventual jaeminsu); pg-13
romance/drama
3,453 words
because of/blamed on/for itsplashes ♥
[part one]

Sometimes, it can’t be helped. Sometimes, fine lines are meant to be crossed.

Comments

[dystopialights]

haha, it's ironic but i was writing this just as those situations were happening... it was like real life was helping me finish the fic. dunno if that's a good or bad thing, though D:

thank you dear! i'll do my best ♥

[akabeee]

waiittt. that actually happened in real life?!

[dystopialights]

max matsuura put up on his twitter that, at one point, jaejoong offered his hand and changmin ignored it, and that jaejoong was obviously upset over it. there was also some that said min ignored matsuura's hand, and that's why jaejoong was upset, but knowing how respectful they all are to their superiors, i highly doubt it.

very upsetting, but it certainly worked well in the fic :'D

[oldwillow_brook]

There's just so much here. It's so thick, full of unfinished sentences and uncertain desires and just so much of everything that its like where do you start from to begin to unravel

[dystopialights]

So - long, elqoquent comments deserves an equally long, eloquent response... but I'm afraid I've got nothing D: You've really laid out a lot of the layers I was creating within the fic - I didn't want any relationship to seem one-dimensional or completely one-sided, but neither did I want to be too blatant about it, either. Therefore I can just say I'm both awed by your insight and flattered that you like it so much.

I can only hope the finale will live up to expectations. Thank you so much for reading and commenting - despite my late reply, this comment really made my day :D♥

[kurogoma]

i am still digesting this, and can't really put my thoughts into one proper coherent comment.

the tension was so thick between two, amongst three.

there's so much left unsaid or unfinished that one moment i thought i know what they were feeling, but then the next i wasn't sure, especially jaejoong.

yet one thing is clear to me and that is for both, changmin's still the center of their universe, so i think he holds the glue to keep things from falling apart. can't wait for the last part.

[dystopialights]

there's a lot going unsaid, that's for sure, it's hard for even me to keep it all straight, lol. but changmin is always between them - even when he isn't there :)

thanks for reading ♥

[enigmaxempress]

ACK WHYYYYYYY?!?!?!
siiiighs. so so SAD.

my heart hurts just reading this. not like im going to stop though xD
take your time, even if i can't wait for the next part!

[dystopialights]

): jaesu have become drama whores, it's a sad fact ):

but don't despair too much! the next chapter holds slightly brighter things, that i can say at the very least :') glad you enjoyed this, i'll do my best to make it a good finish!

thanks for reading ♥

[dystopialights]

lol, i think that "but..." says a lot about this fic ;D there's even more relationship drama coming in the next part, so look out for it! i'm glad you've liked it so far ♥

[dystopialights]

hmm... i can't say anymore~

:3