"In the fog and cold of the city...."

Jan 21, 2009 01:05


Three new poems!! Inspiration's been hitting with power these past few nights and this is the result. Enjoy!

The Parting Of Women )

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cgf_kat January 21 2009, 23:34:14 UTC
These are all beautiful, girl. I especially love the first one. It's so sad and yet I can identify. I've had to move so many times...or that's what it says to 'me,' about leaving people, best friends. I don't know exactly what you were writing about, but it's even more beautiful because it's not exact. People 'can' find ways to identify. A lot of your poems are like that, and I love them for it.

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dvshipper January 21 2009, 23:40:24 UTC
Aw thanks! That's so perfect that you love the first one because it's the one closest to my heart. Many of my poems have a certain fictitious kick to them, but that one just came straight out of me.

That's exactly what poetry should be about, and fiction too, for that matter. Having emotion there, yet people can still see what they want or need to in it as well.

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