Title: Porridge (New and Improved)
Author: Renaissance Makoto  harmless_one 
Fandom: Justice League Universe
Pairing: Kal-El/Bruce Wayne(s)
Rating: R
Commentator: Rose etta  rose_etta

Excerpt:

She shuddered and looked again at the machine.

It was ingenious. Nowhere in the world was there a computer like this. A perfect mutt of tech with a strong Kryptonian base and ( Read more... )

Title:  Porridge (New and Improved)
Author: Renaissance Makoto (harmless_one )
Fandom:  Justice League Universe
Pairing:  Kal-El/Bruce Wayne(s)
Rating: R
Commentator:  rose_etta

( Part Two, here! )

Title:  Porridge (New and Improved)

Author: Renaissance Makoto ( ( Read more... )

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( Moving On by Astolat, with DVD Commentary, part 3 of 3 )

Part 1 of 3

( Moving On by Astolat, with DVD Commentary, part 2 of 3 )

Here are my DVD comments on Moving On, by astolat -- please note, this is a comedy, and jokes don't flow well with constant interruptions, so if you haven't read it yet, I suggest you read the story in its entirety first, then come back here for the comments!

( Moving On by Astolat, with DVD Commentary, part 1 of 3 )