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Badfic Challenge by janet_carter

Apr 17, 2006 17:39

Title: Help me! I broke apart my insides.
Prompt: Fraser and Dief switch bodies. What whacky hijinks ensue when wolf-Fraser makes moon eyes at Kowalski and Frannie needs a sitter for Ante? Set to a Nine Inch Nails "Closer" if it were covered by Weird Al.
Prompt written by: moosesal
rating/warnings/etc: PG/PG-13 for mild bestiality, sketchy fashion ( Read more... )

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Comments 34

isiscolo April 17 2006, 22:40:46 UTC

YES YES YES! WHEE!

I admit I was kinda hoping for this prompt, but you did a bang-up job. Dief's dialogue as Fraser was perfect. And I loved the ending.

janet_carter April 17 2006, 23:51:16 UTC

Yay! Thank you; I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

And yes, it was such a fabulous prompt - the basic idea could really work as a non-badfic story.

brooklinegirl April 18 2006, 00:03:47 UTC

heeeeeeeeeee. okay. omg. a) hysterically funny. b) so totally DS that for most of it, I was all, "okay, yeah, I can see that." c) Fraser-as-Dief is some of the funniest stuff I've read in a while. and finally, d) I am REALLY VERY GLAD we didn't get any details as to what Fraser was doing with Ante. *cringes*

WONDERFULLY bad fic!

janet_carter April 18 2006, 00:46:41 UTC

Yay; thank you! It was so much fun to write, even if I had to keep reminding myself to make it bad. And it seemed kindest to wipe everyone's brains of whatever happened...

shayheyred April 18 2006, 01:45:00 UTC

Hee! Ya know it's gonna be a bad!fic when the warning says "mild bestiality."
!!!!!!!1111!!!

janet_carter April 18 2006, 02:31:41 UTC

Thanx!!! I wanted to make sure that ppl wouldn't be disappointed that there wasn't more explicit bestiality, you know?

indywind April 18 2006, 15:19:34 UTC

For which I say, thank god.

Good job.

janet_carter April 19 2006, 23:28:15 UTC

Hee; thank you!

timian April 18 2006, 02:46:42 UTC

I think maybe something's very wrong with me that I got all excited when it came time for the bestiality. Um. Anyway. Great story! Very funny! And the scene with Dief/Fraser and Ante? Was perfect. He's such a dog. Er. Literally.

janet_carter April 18 2006, 13:21:16 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you, um, enjoyed it.

defaultlyric April 18 2006, 03:56:40 UTC

"Hey, baby, want one of these?"
It kills me when I imagine that line coming out of Fraser's mouth. Then it kills me again when I think that Deifenbaker, if able, would say that.

Ohdear. Brilliance.

janet_carter April 18 2006, 13:26:07 UTC

Hee! Like someone said below, the idea of Paul Gross playing that scene - well, I think I hurt my own brain. Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it!