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Jun 26, 2009 15:05

something feverish
2464; pg
yoochun/junsu

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bambinainnero June 26 2009, 19:44:36 UTC
junsu can't help from blushing but yoochun's cold fingers that run down the sides of his cheek leaving silver streaks against his skin take away any shame. and now the temperature is dropping with each second and he hears the crash and thunder of waves and the ocean and the hiss of lava meeting the ocean.

wow. the imagery of this is just so beautiful ..i-idek♥
so, let's say that yoosu is THE otp and that I might be slightly biased, but this was gorgeous <3 and sososo original. and junsu's wide eyes. and chunface's laugh. and junsu's checking his temperature SJHFAJJHFJAK OH JUNSU. (i'm trying HARD to avoid keysmash, please appreciate it fasfhskhfsk♥)

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drugsex June 27 2009, 01:00:23 UTC
word, my friend, WORD. i'm also slightly biased, if you couldn't tell. :DD

i'm glad you liked the premise, and i very much appreciate the entirety of your comment, keysmash or no. :)!!!

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cypriphobia June 26 2009, 19:47:04 UTC
8D! kissy!yoosu with i-don't-know-what-i'm-doing!su~~ this was so cute and well, hot XD

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drugsex June 27 2009, 01:00:54 UTC
yay! thank you for reading! :)

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thevirginia June 26 2009, 19:54:38 UTC
this was really adorable :) and when yoochun said notifying the press i instantly thought of jaejoong XD

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drugsex June 27 2009, 01:01:21 UTC
:DD haha, who else would listen to him? thanks for reading!

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thevirginia June 27 2009, 01:02:27 UTC
hahhaa, so true! and i totally second the the jaesu request down there V ^^v

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drugsex June 27 2009, 01:11:53 UTC
oh no! you should see my reply. D: D:

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illuminations June 26 2009, 20:14:55 UTC
fjkdsl oh god okay, so this was like fifty kinds of adorable. I totally have a thing for fics with these fun supernatural elements, especially when they happen to Junsu and ahhhhhh. I liked how it wasn't completely crack and the "I miss you" scene really grounded the story and made it believable. But overall I just want to squish these two a lot. :D

PS HOW DO YOU FEEL ABOUT WRITING JAESU. :))) For I am shameless...

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drugsex June 27 2009, 01:03:22 UTC
:DD i'm thrilled the cute was able to work with the supernatural part of it! thank you for reading.

i like 'em shameless :DD.

but um. so i guess i have to reveal a dark secret of mine now. jaesu? i kind of...don't get it. D:

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illuminations June 27 2009, 01:13:02 UTC
SOBBING I FIND THIS UNACCEPTABLE. :((( what don't you get? DO I NEED TO SPAM? fjgihdkls D: D: D:

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drugsex June 27 2009, 01:14:25 UTC
i. um. find it incredibly incredibly awkward????????

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florentineeggs June 26 2009, 22:10:09 UTC
i don't read yoosu but for you baby i do.

so cute and creative ♥

"you meant being aroused, right? i feel like my body's on fire around jaejoong sometimes." yunho blushes.

"oh. um, no. that's not what i was talking about." junsu replies, hesitantly, starts to back away.

"oh."

"yeah."

"okay then."

teeeee.

whatever changmin said must've worked, because junsu doesn't see yoochun anymore.

idk the power of changmin's words makes me happy \o/ ilu(andmissyouagain)
lskdfjasld i'm glad you wrote this because it is so rainy and miserable here i kind of needed it ♥ mwah!

you got a new layout and actual icons! what happened to the 'wtf is syntax' omg that was so cute i wanted to pinch your cheeks forever

ps i love your chinese (:

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drugsex June 27 2009, 01:09:40 UTC
baby you sacrifice so much for me :'(

it sort of figures that you would quote back the two only non-yoosu parts in the entire thing, but it's okay i guess i love you anyways.

rainy, well bb 我让所有的乌云都退散好吧?great song btw.

it was time to not be a total slob. and homg the icons make it like a picture book! it satisfies the eternal 3 year old in me.

i, um decided that broadcasting my tenuous relationship with grammar/illiteracy to the general public may not have been the best way to title my writing journal so that's why i nixed that :(

ps i love you :DDD but don't squeeze my cheeks ok that's my m.o.

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