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Black as Night. Red as Cherries.

Jul 08, 2008 22:56

Title: Black as Night. Red as Cherries.
Part Four
Author: rahram
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word Count: 1,155
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Last week I stubbed my toe, went to the hospital, found out the pain didn't even belong to me.
Warnings: Violence, Extended Warnings
Notes: About half an hour ago. The phrase "black as night. red as cherries." ( Read more... )

black as night. red as cherries.

Comments 12

unrequited666 July 9 2008, 03:27:31 UTC

Ooh Jensen didn't tell Jared the truth... and it sounds like Michael's in on it...

And he's afraid of Jared's human lie detector-ism. What secrets is he hiding?

And how do Mike and Jensen know each other? (Don't say from Smallville... lol)

slash_freak_oz July 9 2008, 04:17:40 UTC

*falls over laughing* @ Smallville comment!

rah_ram July 9 2008, 07:39:57 UTC

lol, dum,dum,dum!!!!

hehe, he knows him from Smallville. :D

you ask the question I can't give an answer to lol!

slash_freak_oz July 9 2008, 04:17:00 UTC

I can see why the Russians want him....human lie detector!!

great chappie....can't wait for more

rah_ram July 9 2008, 07:41:03 UTC

lol he's more than a human lie detector :)

lol I actually just recently figured out what's going to happen in this fic so I should be able to actually update it more often now :)

thanks for reading!

idiot4dean July 9 2008, 08:23:26 UTC

Poor Jared being kept in the dark, but with his new found gift it's going to be harder for people to do that from now on!!!

Looking forward to more.

rah_ram July 9 2008, 13:43:55 UTC

lol, maybe, but he really can't control it. So people have a 50-50 chance of getting by with lying.

Thanks for reading!

lycaness July 9 2008, 12:04:18 UTC

I don't trust Mike, I don't know why, it started last chapter and this one has made it worse. At first I shrugged it off cause I thought he and Jared had been friends forever, but it's only been two years. I just don't trust him.
Great update, seeing Jared's powers developing, can't wait to see what else he can do and how he deals with it.
*hugs*

rah_ram July 9 2008, 13:46:09 UTC

lol, There's going to be some irony in this fic before it's finished. I've actually been mapping it out with couple different people to make sure it all sounds reasonable. Most likely at least one character will end up betraying the others.

Thanks for reading!

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rah_ram July 10 2008, 02:44:49 UTC

lol, I've been working on the new chapter today. Just trying to get Jared to stop getting defensive. *sigh* I'm sure I'll find away eventually lol. Maybe candy....

Thanks for reading!