Continuing my Story and in need of a Beta
Hello out there,
nearly a year ago I wrote a little Oneshot that now is supposed to act as a Prolog.
My Beta from back then encouraged me to continue the story but first I didn't have the time and now she's sadly rather busy. So I'm in need of some help to find my mistakes. I added a link to the Oneshot. The new Story will be rated M or MA and I got a few chapters ready.
Since english is not my mother tongue I would love to have someone beta it befor I post it.
Thank you in advance.
AngelofAmore
The OneShot:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8461336/chapters/19383895
nearly a year ago I wrote a little Oneshot that now is supposed to act as a Prolog.
My Beta from back then encouraged me to continue the story but first I didn't have the time and now she's sadly rather busy. So I'm in need of some help to find my mistakes. I added a link to the Oneshot. The new Story will be rated M or MA and I got a few chapters ready.
Since english is not my mother tongue I would love to have someone beta it befor I post it.
Thank you in advance.
AngelofAmore
The OneShot:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8461336/chapters/19383895