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First Offering

Nov 17, 2004 00:47

Title: A Love Across Time
Author: Anzy
Author's Notes: I am not entirely fond of how this came out. I may go back soon and revise the prologue before I even start on the next chapter to this. I really want it to come out much better than it looks. However, I am just wrote this in hopes to remove myself from the writer's block I have been under. ( Read more... )

fic post, rating: pg

Comments 24

Feel Better *hands you tissue* 4shadow November 20 2004, 03:35:47 UTC

Hm.

I felt like I thought I knew what was going on, but then...

Well, of course. It's a cliffhanger, it worked *laughing*

Continue.

Re: Feel Better *hands you tissue* kiryuu_utena November 24 2004, 04:19:03 UTC

Heh...I wasn't sure if it was going to be any good. I might go back and revise it but I am glad I made you think you knew what was going on. It was what I was aiming for. >> I like being evil when it comes to prologues. I want the reader to think they understand but give the next chapter a chance and I will probably throw you for a loop. xD

And thank you ^^ I am feeling a bit better now!

shag_me_draco November 23 2004, 22:29:06 UTC

yes please continue! a very catchy introduction, it makes me HAVE to know what the hell is going on.

Jaqui
(im friending you)

kiryuu_utena November 24 2004, 04:20:08 UTC

I shall! ^^ I am going to revise the prologue first. I wasn't quite happy with it. Who knows you never know when the first one is coming. >D

Suseh

Feel Free to Friend *smile* 4shadow November 24 2004, 05:34:36 UTC

I'd love to keep up w/this fic =)

Re: Feel Free to Friend *smile* kiryuu_utena November 24 2004, 11:05:57 UTC

I am going to work extra hard on it during the Christmas hols. You are welcome to friend me. :D

Just Don't Work Too Hard 4shadow November 24 2004, 20:06:40 UTC

Then it's no fun.

Have a Good One =)

Re: Just Don't Work Too Hard kiryuu_utena November 25 2004, 06:49:12 UTC

Thankies. =) Happy Thanksgiving!

U2 *smiling* 4shadow November 25 2004, 08:42:43 UTC

Hopefully, Mom will have ham.

I'm not much of a fan of turkey, to be quite honest =)

Re: U2 *smiling* kiryuu_utena November 25 2004, 10:48:50 UTC

We had to have Thanksgiving a few days early since my dad is a truck driver. Plus we didn't want him home since this Thanksgiving will mark the anniversary of his best friend's suicide. =/

I hope you have a wonderful weekend. ^^