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Nov 23, 2008 20:29

Sora the Mage: Plotline More Refined

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You as being the main writer now, can do anything you please with plot that you think will make it better. Or be easier for you in the ling run. Espeshaly on dialog, when it comes to the people saying meaningful things, I get too m ushy and cliché sometimes. SO don’t feel bad about ( Read more... )

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oblivium November 24 2008, 06:04:22 UTC

It was a pain to read... but I loved it XD There's room for a lot of possibilities, and the basic idea is definitely interesting. That's my kind of story! I try to keep the characters as IC as possible even in AU fics, so when Sora's being given away as a gift, he won't go without a little fight ;]

LOL @ Liaf Cipé. I might change the name if you don't mind ;P

Thanks so much for sharing this. And you can definitely be my beta! I'll most likely come to you when I want to change things, or add stuff, etc. I'll start making my own notes, but I'll wait for the entire plot to start writing.

dragonlady2000 November 24 2008, 08:32:27 UTC

Like I said, things can always be changed, and or improved. I have no qualms with changes. This fic originally was just a fic where Sepharoth stole Sora and gave him to his son Riku and a gift. But that died with a fiery passion before it got past my brain. And When I get the rest to you, Id love to hear your ideas. And hopefully more things will become more clear ( ... )

dragonlady2000 November 24 2008, 08:35:42 UTC

I type too mutch -.-; *sigh*

oblivium November 26 2008, 00:22:39 UTC

rofl no it's fine. Can't wait for the next part! I'll come to you with ideas and such when I actually start writing it.

Besides, I love details, and I wanna be sure I get exactly what you had in mind so don't worry about over explaining anything.

dragonlady2000 November 27 2008, 05:00:01 UTC

Oh I'm so relived, I was worried I went overboard. The next part is going to take a little longer then expected. I've hit a bit of a snag on what I was going to have during the next part, due to some plot-holes, and some parts not lineing up quite well. I'm gonna see if I can get it done sometime tomorrow, I have the day off and there will be lots of pie~

dragonlady2000 December 19 2008, 00:38:34 UTC

Aaah~ TT.TT I didn't mean for it to take so long! I had an unexpected hospital trip(nothing serious) and it took a lot of time. And now I cant get the story flowing again TT.TT, I have some main incidences planed and stuff. Anyway, so I'm probably going to need you help with a good ending.

If you want I can send ya what I have so far and help me with some more plot, or ideas? That would help alot. Anyhow, sorry I took so long!

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