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[dragonlady2000]

Sora the Mage: Plotline More Refined

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You as being the main writer now, can do anything you please with plot that you think will make it better. Or be easier for you in the ling run. Espeshaly on dialog, when it comes to the people saying meaningful things, I get too m ushy and cliché sometimes. SO don’t feel bad about

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[dragonlady2000]

Like I said, things can always be changed, and or improved. I have no qualms with changes. This fic originally was just a fic where Sepharoth stole Sora and gave him to his son Riku and a gift. But that died with a fiery passion before it got past my brain. And When I get the rest to you, Id love to hear your ideas. And hopefully more things will become more clear.

And I LOVE with a passion, characters keeping IC. Ansem I figured would be firfict for the take-over-the-kingdom-guy, because he was kind of like that in the game. Or from what a remember… ANYWAY! The most OOC character would be Sepharoth, I tried to keep him IC but it was so hard taking in the fact him IC is a crazy overpowerd ex-SOLGER, bent on destroying the world. Soo~ Ive always was drawn to him being an intelligent, slightly arrogant, leader like figure he was before he went crazy. But IDK.

And as for Liaf Cipè, I only orriginaly made him to be a cute kid to be Soras friend in Kingdom Hearts Castel. Whos main objective is to be killed via vamp, to be an antagonist for Sora having a hatred towards vampires before he was sent off with the very things he hated, by Ansem. But he name can totally be changed. And since he was just doomed to die I ended up naming him that because backwards its Epic Fail. Heh, I’m a horrible person.

And hells ya Soras going to put up a fight. Hes far from a roll-ver-and-take-it-uke. They only reason Sepharoth took him, was because the whole situation was so suspicious since the boy was so close to the previous king. And if something struck his curiosity, hes determined to figure it out. And because of this, in the long run, becomes Ansems downfall. (Ill explain this better in the next instillation. If you wish.)

And smack me if I try to over explain something’s, I catch myself doing that a lot.

I will make the last part easer to read. Sorry about that! But that will be tomarrow as sleep calls to me~

[dragonlady2000]

I type too mutch -.-; *sigh*

[oblivium]

rofl no it's fine. Can't wait for the next part! I'll come to you with ideas and such when I actually start writing it.

Besides, I love details, and I wanna be sure I get exactly what you had in mind so don't worry about over explaining anything.

[dragonlady2000]

Oh I'm so relived, I was worried I went overboard. The next part is going to take a little longer then expected. I've hit a bit of a snag on what I was going to have during the next part, due to some plot-holes, and some parts not lineing up quite well. I'm gonna see if I can get it done sometime tomorrow, I have the day off and there will be lots of pie~

[dragonlady2000]

Aaah~ TT.TT I didn't mean for it to take so long! I had an unexpected hospital trip(nothing serious) and it took a lot of time. And now I cant get the story flowing again TT.TT, I have some main incidences planed and stuff. Anyway, so I'm probably going to need you help with a good ending.

If you want I can send ya what I have so far and help me with some more plot, or ideas? That would help alot. Anyhow, sorry I took so long!