FIC: Speak (NC-17)

Apr 23, 2012 05:38

Title: Speak
Author: literaryspell
Prompt: # 50
Summary: Draco is content in his submissive role with Harry happily dominating him… That is, until he isn’t anymore.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Warnings: D/s, rimming, mention of bottom!Draco
Word Count: 2200
Author's Notes: So, darling secretsalex, even though I made you write this prompt, I still didn't take it ( Read more... )

type: fic, kink: rimming, contains: hints of bottom!draco, rating: nc-17, fic length: short, author: literaryspell, [admin] fest-2012, contains: d/s

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frayach April 23 2012, 14:51:09 UTC
Dear God on a Ritz cracker . . . That was hot beyond belief. OMG. This is definitely going into my . . . Uhm, special folder. Wow.

On a more coherent note: I love the whole idea of a Dom "submitting" to his sub while at the same time remaining unquestionably the Dom. Despite switching top/bottom, Harry was still very much in control. I'd never thought about that kind of situation before, and it was very interesting not to mention crazy fucking hot.

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secretlypadfoot April 23 2012, 18:59:40 UTC
There is something about a dominant taking it up the rear that really tickles my fancy. This was nicely done. :)

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niekebieke April 23 2012, 19:14:26 UTC
I'm not a big fan of D/s stories. It is one of those things that I have tried reading many times - in fanfic and original romance novels - and nearly everytime I get squicked somewhere. Usually it has nothing to do with a smut scene, but all to do with the interaction between the Dom and Sub. It is one of those things where I can objectively see how a healthy D/s relationship benefits both and how it despite its ineherent in-equality it is actually quite a well-balanced relationship. But on a personal level I just can't relate to either wanting to be a dom or a sub ( ... )

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lijahlover April 23 2012, 20:57:57 UTC
Mmmmmmm this was so sexy and hot, I loved how much they both trusted each other to try new things.

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secretsalex April 24 2012, 16:56:13 UTC
Oh, you. This is exactly what I wanted. Trust and intimacy and a D/s relationship that is totally believable.

Harry had an uncanny ability to either know or quickly suss out what Draco wanted. More often than Draco would like, Harry had figured it out before him, leaving Draco a mess of confused satiation when Harry applied his knowledge.

Oh, Harry. Super!Dom. How I <3 you.

"Want me to undress you, Sir?" he asked, knowing the quickest way to get Harry to do what he wanted was to do what Harry wanted.

Oh, Draco. You are every devious sub ever. Myself included. *g*

Harry loved taking Draco down and then catching him before he fell. Fucking saviour complex.

YES!

He had to hand it to Harry: he made it look effortless to fuck, wank, and even kiss Draco all at the same time.

Haha. Whenever I think about topping or Domming, I become pretty instantly overwhelmed by the sheer amount of work it requires.

I could quote more of this at you, but you get the idea. I love it. :)

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