Comments | drabbles100: Crunch (X-Men Movieverse, John/Bobby)

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Crunch (X-Men Movieverse, John/Bobby)

Sep 25, 2008 21:53

Title: Crunch
Fandom: X-Men (Movieverse)
Characters: John Allerdyce/Bobby Drake
Prompt: 056 - Breakfast
Word Count: 188
Rating: G

( John is the first thing he sees when he opens his eyes. )

Comments 10

checkmatey September 25 2008, 21:12:13 UTC

awww <3

salmon_pink September 28 2008, 15:17:55 UTC

Thanks. ^___^

_profiterole_ September 25 2008, 21:16:02 UTC

This one's much happier. ^__^

salmon_pink September 28 2008, 15:18:15 UTC

Yeah, I'm trying to stop myself from writing angst all the time. XD

openedbook September 26 2008, 00:00:22 UTC

Hnmmm.

I enjoyed this, but I diondn't feel john too much in it. Didn't seem like him.

salmon_pink September 28 2008, 15:18:57 UTC

Sorry this one didn't work for you, was there anything in particular you didn't like, so I can work on it next time?

openedbook September 28 2008, 22:36:08 UTC

He seemed a little too... domesticated? I dunno. Maybe it's just me.

John's just the kmind of character you love to hate, y'know? So i guess I like seeing him as more of an angsty asshole. Lol

eros494 September 26 2008, 14:07:41 UTC

Your drabbles make me love this pairing sooooo much! I LOVED this! ^.^

salmon_pink September 28 2008, 15:19:28 UTC

Ah, yes, this pairing is a wonderful kind of love. Glad you enjoyed. :D

briyamineko84 October 4 2008, 10:38:11 UTC

Aww, this is so beautiful! I loved it!