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Theme 04: Defining Moment

Apr 04, 2011 00:14

Today's theme:
Defining Moment1. Submit your drabble that fits this theme as a comment to this post. It should be between 100-300 words, if you go over/under a bit that's fine! If it's longer than say 400 words, I ask that you post on your journal or fanfiction.net and then submit the link to this post. If you find that your story is going to be ( Read more... )

theme 04: defining moment

Comments 23

rattyjol April 4 2011, 05:33:59 UTC

Fandom: Animorphs
Claim: fandom
Rating: PG
Drabbles completed so far: 3/100 ( ... )

cowards_kiss April 5 2011, 03:24:16 UTC

Oh, this is lovely. It's been years since I've read and of the Animorphs books but you're making me want to go back to them again!

shatter failegaidin April 4 2011, 19:30:17 UTC

Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Claim: John/Elizabeth
Rating: PG
Drabbles completed so far: 4/100 ( ... )

Re: shatter regularamanda April 5 2011, 02:45:56 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWW ♥

Re: shatter failegaidin April 9 2011, 03:44:50 UTC

LOL. Thanks :)

Osborn: Defining Moments derekmetaltron April 4 2011, 22:43:18 UTC

This got into double-drabble territory, sorry. I'm very fond of Green Goblin and got the right excuse. ;)

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Fandom: Marvel Comics
Claim: General Series
Character(s): Norman Osborn/Green Goblin (POV)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Spoilers for numerous Osborn/Goblin stories up to end of Siege, descriptions of Character Death.
Drabbles completed so far: 3/100 ( ... )

Re: Osborn: Defining Moments regularamanda April 5 2011, 03:48:44 UTC

ohhh I love this! :D It was great! And I loved how you did the "flashes" with the sentence not being complete at the end of the paragraphs. :D

fickle_fics April 4 2011, 22:45:57 UTC

Fandom: Original
Claim: Anabelle Cartwright
Rating: G
Drabbles completed so far: 2/100

When she sees him out walking down the street from her window it’s like her heart starts beating again. It’s like when she first saw Hugh, only this time she isn’t half mad, living in some abandoned warehouse, living off tramps and drunks and addicts. This time she is clear headed. It is not love at first sight, she has no fantasies about making him like her, of creating another companion. This time she sees another chance, something normal, something equal. She sees life and beauty. She sees lust and desire. She sees life, And a chance to pretend.

ac_123 April 5 2011, 16:21:24 UTC

I liked this. I thought it was very interesting and it makes me want to read more. :D

fickle_fics April 5 2011, 20:13:09 UTC

Oh thank you! I don't normally do original stuff because it's so much more difficult to get feedback, so I really appreciate this.

And I've just read through your drabbles, I really like the world you're creating.

ac_123 April 5 2011, 20:58:39 UTC

You're welcome. Anything to help out my fellow original content writers!

Thank you. I've been working on it for a really, really long time.

regularamanda April 5 2011, 02:44:21 UTC

Fandom: Stargate-verse
Claim: Sam Carter/Jack O'Neill
Rating: G
Drabbles completed so far: 04/100

As he looks at her, trapped behind the force shield, he finally understands what he’s been hiding for far too long.

In a moment of stark clarity, he finally admits to himself what he can never admit to her.

He can’t leave her, he won’t leave her, not here, not like this. Never.

He needs her to be his second in command and needs her to be his voice of reason in a crisis. He needs to hear her laugh and see her smile.

He just needs her.

In his life, in his future, in his everything.

He loves her.

The words aren’t said, not out loud at least, but they are clearly spelled out in his eyes…

…and reflected back in hers.