A.C. R4
Assassin's Choice 33.4B
starting count: 3625
ending count: 3837
gain/loss: +212
Actual (processed) word count: 3837
Total New Words (Day/Week): 1031 / 5878
Total for the Day: 4868
Total for the Week: 9715
starting line:
Jerusha glanced sidelong through lowered lashes at Kalenthiyas.
ending line:
She could never love him. Not when she loved another.
darling:
Sitting quietly in a pool of shadow and silence on the outer edges of the camp, Rhizan watched the priest and the knight with nervous eyes. A twitch ticked his cheek. He no longer had any protection, his deal had been destroyed by a ball of flame, and he was certain at least one of the Kurianth was watching him. He was wanted in Windhome for his quick fingers; he had to slip away soon or risk being arrested. He'd spent enough nights in cells in his life to know he didn't want to repeat the experience.
Yea, not a lot changed in the opening and ending lines. The plan is to go through once more early next week, then post it to the crit group.
4 chapters left. Maybe less if another 2 get combined, which is possible.
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whysper kids & excitement :: journey New Focus: Writing :: booklog The Queen's Bastard
starting count: 3625
ending count: 3837
gain/loss: +212
Actual (processed) word count: 3837
Total New Words (Day/Week): 1031 / 5878
Total for the Day: 4868
Total for the Week: 9715
starting line:
Jerusha glanced sidelong through lowered lashes at Kalenthiyas.
ending line:
She could never love him. Not when she loved another.
darling:
Sitting quietly in a pool of shadow and silence on the outer edges of the camp, Rhizan watched the priest and the knight with nervous eyes. A twitch ticked his cheek. He no longer had any protection, his deal had been destroyed by a ball of flame, and he was certain at least one of the Kurianth was watching him. He was wanted in Windhome for his quick fingers; he had to slip away soon or risk being arrested. He'd spent enough nights in cells in his life to know he didn't want to repeat the experience.
Yea, not a lot changed in the opening and ending lines. The plan is to go through once more early next week, then post it to the crit group.
4 chapters left. Maybe less if another 2 get combined, which is possible.
~~~
most recent
whysper kids & excitement :: journey New Focus: Writing :: booklog The Queen's Bastard