Worth the Ache (2/2)

[domfangirlfic]

Title: Worth the Ache (2/2)
Author: domfangirl
Pairing/Characters: Michael/Sara, with an appearance by Lincoln, Jane and their kids
Genre: Post-escape (from Sona), angst, drama, fluff, humor
Rating: NC-17 (Language, outright sex)
Summary: Michael and Sara haven't seen each other in three years, because he left her in Panama after he got out of Sona. Now

Comments

[sunrunnersioned]

awwwww-with all the preS3 anixty this really helps! But it's just so darn sweet! I completely love it! And that Linc/Jane part so made my night! Thx for the great fic!

[badboy_fangirl]

Thank you. It's sort of fun to write your favorite character as a side character because you really make it count, you know? Gotta get that characterization in there in small amount of words. Fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

[scribblecat]

*sniff*
Aww. wow! Hot sex, angst, even a bit of danger, great chapter!

“Did you ever think that you said that to scare me away, to remind me that you’re an addict, and that even though right then you weren’t, there was always the chance that you could be using?”

Ooh nice! I really like how you included this, wound it into this story.

And also you included real peoples things in the sex, like stretch marks!

[badboy_fangirl]

Alas no turkey baster.

but hot sex, right? I do what I can.

[badboy_fangirl]

I do what I can to make it realistic especially when I'm going for mind-blowing too. Gotta have some real life in there. I'm so glad you liked it!

As for why Sara said that to Michael on the train...haven't you wondered? What an odd thing to spring on him right before she's all "Uh, I love you." Interesting!

[elizabethb]

lovely ficy...could be interesting for a sequel or something..*wink*.

[badboy_fangirl]

I doubt it, but thank you ;-)

[happywriter06]

*wipes away stray tears*

he was with her, not just inside her searching for something he’d lost, not trying to find something in her that could never appease him; no, this was making love, this was what she never knew she was missing because the only way she’d ever had him was broken, bereft, empty. Now he was whole, and completely with her in the moment. She had a brief vision of the future flash before her eyes as they reconnected and for just a split second she saw that if this wasn’t indicative of the rest of her life, nothing else could ever make it right.
I love this part. I don't know what else to in order to convey just how wonderful this part is.

Sara, I’ll take you however I can get you, but stripped down and bare is how I want you.
WOW!!

Linc greeting Sara and her reaction? Pricless.

There was a quiet happiness in their house, a feeling Sara remembered from being with Jane and Lincoln in Panama.
I know this is about M/S but a fic where L/J are the established relationship just makes me deliriously happy.

I’m screwed

[badboy_fangirl]

Linc and Jane happy and established was great fun to write, actually. Not as fun as Linc saying something inappropriate to Jane, however...you know, if you don't do something with that idea, I may have too. :D

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, and found so many aspects true to the characters!

[happywriter06]

you know, if you don't do something with that idea, I may have too. :D
Please don't me doing something with that stop you. The world needs more L/J fics. lol.

[badboy_fangirl]

Maybe that should be a challenge at foxriver_fic? Write a scenario in which Linc says this to Jane....go! :D

[sk56]

What a busy girl you've been!

Excellent work, as always -- you've posited a very believable and specific post-series situation for them, and followed it through honestly. They're complicated people, and a simple 'happily ever after' isn't really for them, but this particular version of it is a possibility.

[badboy_fangirl]

And to carry the story any further would be too certain and Mary-Sue like. Hence the big lettered warning on the story at pbfic.net. Nobody reads that stuff anyway, I've already had like three new reviews of *pls update soon*...

I'll probably get them for weeks, *hope you update soon!*

Ah, well. What can I do? Oh, I know, not write M/S very often ;-)

[sk56]

Don't fret about things you can't change, and write what you want to write.