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Story Or Series Title: Far Away
Fandom: Death Note
Culprit Author's Name: Maria-Hunter
Full Name (plus titles if any): Calla Lawliet
Full Species(es): tragic widow Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): color not mentioned, hairstyle is "ringlets" with bangs
Eye Color (include adjectives): "Calla's light blue eyes welled with unshod tears."
Unusual Markings/Colorations:
Special Possessions (if any): L's spawn residing within her.
Annoying Origin: Technically, there is no origin--it's a standalone story with the Sue having been in the picture all along.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: L's wife. The Japanese Task Force worships her, and Near, Mello, and Matt are all together with them at the same time to worry over her in OOC fashion despite Mello and Near canonically not finding out about L's death till a month after it happened, not "a week or two."
Annoying Special Abilities: Screwing up the timeline, making everyone OOC
Other Annoying Traits: This is, quite honestly, the most blatant case yet that I've come across, of writing a fic solely to showcase an OC.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Calla let a small giggle escape her lips as she remembered the small fight that gotten into that night, which had ended in the two of them sleeping together. She laid her hand against her stomach gently and gazed at it with a look of pleasure and pain.
Yesterday, she'd found she was pregnant. With his baby.
She just wished she could have told him before he died. Now he'll never know that he was a father or even have the chance to experience it.
A stray, lonesome tear escaped its prison and trailed down her cheek. Calla didn't try to knock it away. Her arms wrapped themselves around her belly, and she cradled it as if the child was fully developed and in her arms.
“Hello baby.” Calla whispered her voice braking as she croaked, “I'm your mummy ... I'm not perfect, I'm not your father, but I'll do my best, okay?
“Your father would have been a perfect Daddy, but ... he's gone ... somewhere better, I hope ... I wish I could see him one last time ... to tell him about you ... I know he would have loved you if he was here ...”
Fandom: Death Note
Culprit Author's Name: Maria-Hunter
Full Name (plus titles if any): Calla Lawliet
Full Species(es): tragic widow Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): color not mentioned, hairstyle is "ringlets" with bangs
Eye Color (include adjectives): "Calla's light blue eyes welled with unshod tears."
Unusual Markings/Colorations:
Special Possessions (if any): L's spawn residing within her.
Annoying Origin: Technically, there is no origin--it's a standalone story with the Sue having been in the picture all along.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: L's wife. The Japanese Task Force worships her, and Near, Mello, and Matt are all together with them at the same time to worry over her in OOC fashion despite Mello and Near canonically not finding out about L's death till a month after it happened, not "a week or two."
Annoying Special Abilities: Screwing up the timeline, making everyone OOC
Other Annoying Traits: This is, quite honestly, the most blatant case yet that I've come across, of writing a fic solely to showcase an OC.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Calla let a small giggle escape her lips as she remembered the small fight that gotten into that night, which had ended in the two of them sleeping together. She laid her hand against her stomach gently and gazed at it with a look of pleasure and pain.
Yesterday, she'd found she was pregnant. With his baby.
She just wished she could have told him before he died. Now he'll never know that he was a father or even have the chance to experience it.
A stray, lonesome tear escaped its prison and trailed down her cheek. Calla didn't try to knock it away. Her arms wrapped themselves around her belly, and she cradled it as if the child was fully developed and in her arms.
“Hello baby.” Calla whispered her voice braking as she croaked, “I'm your mummy ... I'm not perfect, I'm not your father, but I'll do my best, okay?
“Your father would have been a perfect Daddy, but ... he's gone ... somewhere better, I hope ... I wish I could see him one last time ... to tell him about you ... I know he would have loved you if he was here ...”