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Story Or Series Title: Starrie Twilight
Fandom: Death Note
Culprit Author's Name: Yuna Lawliet
Full Name (plus titles if any): Yuna Johnson (despite being brought to Wammy's House, is never given a codename.)
Full Species(es): every-anime-tough-girl-cliche-rolled-into-one!Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): "streight dark brown hair shoulder lengthe with pink highlight tips her hair was half up with chopsticks in the bun"
Eye Color (include adjectives): "She had golden brown eye" (in spite of the Suethor's typos, the character does possess both eyes.)
Unusual Markings/Colorations: pink highlights, not that that's especially out-there...
Special Possessions (if any): "punk" outfit, nauseating tough-girl act, the belief that because Japanese aren't impressed by an American, they're all "snobby bitches."
Annoying Origin: "rough side of New York" where "she was trained to fight by her dad since she was 12 years"...no other mentions of family; the story starts with Matt and Mello picking her up on L's orders, I don't know if they're supposed to be at Wammy's House or not, but for some reason, this all takes place in Japan, with Light being one of their fellow classmates...my guess is extreme AU.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: "falls" for "Ryusukie/Ryuzikie", is friends with and moves in with Matt and Mello, senses Light's "dark, very dark and cold" aura and "can see the blood he shed with his death note oozing down his hands."
Annoying Special Abilities: though claiming the gift of sensing auras, only does this in one throwaway paragraph.
Other Annoying Traits: over-the-top, random! douchebaggery is supposed to make her a cool badass who's more hardcore than everyone.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
"Yo!" she shouted making Matt and Mello jump cetimeters apart.
Mello glared at in anger " Who the hell are you" he said still glaring the girl couldn't help but laugh the glare was threatning her her ha what a joke " I'm the girl who L sent you to get Scarface my name is Yuna Johnson." she said smirking
This of course she just called him a name and didn't even know her . Mello grabbed her thoaht "Who the hell are you calling scarface I was once part of the mafia" he yelled at her tighting his grip.
Yuna smirk what Mello didn't know is that she grew up in the rough side of New York she was trained to fight by her dad since she was 12 years grabbed Mello wrist and flipped him to the floor and steped on his uhhh lets see what should I call them ooo I know bubbles while she was walking towards Matt.
Okay here’s the 411 you think they’d be impressed by people from America, ehhh you are so wrong this isn't an anime. Nope sadly there are also snobby bitches in Japan.
"Oh my god, look at her trying to look cute like Misa Misa. It’s so ugly," a girl said.
Hearing this Yuna slammed her hand on their desk. "One, this is punk not ‘cutesy goth like Misa Misa’ and two I have more style than you when you call that cotton candy, and third watch your back," Yuna said satisfied leaving the girl completely speechless.
She walked slowly to the fridge as she looked inside she started to twitch. Okay, you know how the fridge looked inside on Cowboy BebBop? Well, that was how this one looked too.
Yuna slammed the door in annoyance, almost making Matt and Mello jump. "What the hell is your problem?" Mello yelled.
Yuna glared at them, "What the hell is this, a fucking crack house?" she demanded while pointing around.
Matt rubbed the back of his head. "You'll get used to it," he said looking around. Yuna rolled her eyes.
"There's a fucking hole in the wall!" She yelled removing the blanket.
Mello rolled his eyes "Yeah, well, I lost my temper and punched the wall, missing Matt. Is there a problem?" he said glaring at her.
Yuna went quiet for a moment while Matt and Mello stared at her. Then she smirked, "Yeah, control your temper when I'm here, Scarface," she said walking out to go grocery shopping.
Fandom: Death Note
Culprit Author's Name: Yuna Lawliet
Full Name (plus titles if any): Yuna Johnson (despite being brought to Wammy's House, is never given a codename.)
Full Species(es): every-anime-tough-girl-cliche-rolled-into-one!Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): "streight dark brown hair shoulder lengthe with pink highlight tips her hair was half up with chopsticks in the bun"
Eye Color (include adjectives): "She had golden brown eye" (in spite of the Suethor's typos, the character does possess both eyes.)
Unusual Markings/Colorations: pink highlights, not that that's especially out-there...
Special Possessions (if any): "punk" outfit, nauseating tough-girl act, the belief that because Japanese aren't impressed by an American, they're all "snobby bitches."
Annoying Origin: "rough side of New York" where "she was trained to fight by her dad since she was 12 years"...no other mentions of family; the story starts with Matt and Mello picking her up on L's orders, I don't know if they're supposed to be at Wammy's House or not, but for some reason, this all takes place in Japan, with Light being one of their fellow classmates...my guess is extreme AU.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: "falls" for "Ryusukie/Ryuzikie", is friends with and moves in with Matt and Mello, senses Light's "dark, very dark and cold" aura and "can see the blood he shed with his death note oozing down his hands."
Annoying Special Abilities: though claiming the gift of sensing auras, only does this in one throwaway paragraph.
Other Annoying Traits: over-the-top, random! douchebaggery is supposed to make her a cool badass who's more hardcore than everyone.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
"Yo!" she shouted making Matt and Mello jump cetimeters apart.
Mello glared at in anger " Who the hell are you" he said still glaring the girl couldn't help but laugh the glare was threatning her her ha what a joke " I'm the girl who L sent you to get Scarface my name is Yuna Johnson." she said smirking
This of course she just called him a name and didn't even know her . Mello grabbed her thoaht "Who the hell are you calling scarface I was once part of the mafia" he yelled at her tighting his grip.
Yuna smirk what Mello didn't know is that she grew up in the rough side of New York she was trained to fight by her dad since she was 12 years grabbed Mello wrist and flipped him to the floor and steped on his uhhh lets see what should I call them ooo I know bubbles while she was walking towards Matt.
Okay here’s the 411 you think they’d be impressed by people from America, ehhh you are so wrong this isn't an anime. Nope sadly there are also snobby bitches in Japan.
"Oh my god, look at her trying to look cute like Misa Misa. It’s so ugly," a girl said.
Hearing this Yuna slammed her hand on their desk. "One, this is punk not ‘cutesy goth like Misa Misa’ and two I have more style than you when you call that cotton candy, and third watch your back," Yuna said satisfied leaving the girl completely speechless.
She walked slowly to the fridge as she looked inside she started to twitch. Okay, you know how the fridge looked inside on Cowboy BebBop? Well, that was how this one looked too.
Yuna slammed the door in annoyance, almost making Matt and Mello jump. "What the hell is your problem?" Mello yelled.
Yuna glared at them, "What the hell is this, a fucking crack house?" she demanded while pointing around.
Matt rubbed the back of his head. "You'll get used to it," he said looking around. Yuna rolled her eyes.
"There's a fucking hole in the wall!" She yelled removing the blanket.
Mello rolled his eyes "Yeah, well, I lost my temper and punched the wall, missing Matt. Is there a problem?" he said glaring at her.
Yuna went quiet for a moment while Matt and Mello stared at her. Then she smirked, "Yeah, control your temper when I'm here, Scarface," she said walking out to go grocery shopping.