Say It Out Loud (6/12)

Jun 12, 2012 15:24

Pairing: Liam/Zayn
Word Count: this chapter, 1390
Rating: NC17 as there will be future smut  
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liam payne/zayn malik, one direction, fanfic

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dmoskobitch June 13 2012, 01:01:43 UTC
thank you so much you are so lovely <3

yeah Zayn always seems to be kinda full of himself in fics so i was thinking in this one he should not be, he does not actually seem that way and urgh I dunno... Zayn feels!!

Thanks again!!

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niallerhaz June 12 2012, 17:04:40 UTC
I cried at the 'I love you' part. It was beautiful! I was scared Liam would say he had said something else, but Zayn would know, and get pissed because just because he can't hear doesn't mean it's okay for Liam to pretend he didn't say stuff to Zayn when he did.. Idek if you understood what I meant there, but whatever. Amazing as always. x

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dmoskobitch June 13 2012, 01:02:37 UTC
Oooh that actually sounds like it could have been good, a bit of angst thrown in there, shame I didnt use it actually haha!!

Thank you so much <3

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anonymous June 12 2012, 20:57:44 UTC
aw, short but sweet <3

insecure!Zayn is one of my favorite things to read

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dmoskobitch June 13 2012, 01:04:39 UTC
thank you!!

yeah, its rare to find but I love it too, thanks for loving my Zayn :)

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sburet84 June 13 2012, 03:03:01 UTC
ahhhh Can't wait for the next part!! :)

*samantha*

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dmoskobitch June 13 2012, 21:12:35 UTC
I am trying to write it as we speak and it is so hard because it might be smut and I might be bad at it!!

*nervous* haha!

thanks for reading!

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anonymous June 13 2012, 12:02:46 UTC
I love how you characterize Zayn, it just seems like how he'd be irl. defensive, but really just insecure and in need of reassurance. my heart kind of breaks for him in this fic ): And Liam is adorable, I love how dorky he acts in front of Zayn in this and guhh he's so loveable! thank you for updating omg!

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dmoskobitch June 13 2012, 21:13:13 UTC
Yeah I think he would be like that too, I'm so glad you said all of this, thank you <3

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