How's my Pokémon training?

Here you can make comments to my portrayal of the female PC/Dawn from the gameverse of Pokémon Platinum. Anything from praises to critiques to help me in playing her would be most helpful.

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[Character Name] Dawn
[Canon] Pokémon Platinum
[Point Taken from Canon] Just as she's leaving the Distortion World after catching Giratina.

[Age] 15
[Gender] Female
[Sexual Orientation] Unknown as of this point

[Eye Color] Metallic blue
[Hair Color] Metallic Blue
[Height] 5'4"
[Other] She has three Pokemon on hand currently in Somarium (Leafeon, Houndoom ( Read more... )

[When Dawn opens the feed, it's rather obvious from the yawn and eye rubbing that she's had a hard night. There's no gem on her forehead or any sign of anything that the zombies might have been successful in their attack. But Dawn briefly gives the feed a little wave before panning over to a window in her cottage that was clearly broken into with ( Read more... )

[The feed clicks on but it doesn't seem like anyone's home at first. At least not with the distracted blue-haired girl  currently yelling at something that's splashing around off camera.]

--ton! Hey come on, get out of there!

[The splashing continues for a few moments more before the girl sighs and mutters a little "That's better" under her breath. ( Read more... )