HOW'S MY RPING?

Jan 19, 2010 18:11

✘ HOW'S MY RPING?

Try to keep these things in mind while you're critting:

1) What do you enjoy about the person's character, and why? INSTEAD of just: "omg, I love your Bob!" we'd like to see more, "omg, I love your Bob because his interactions with Stacey's mom are absolutely hilarious2) What do you want to see more of from the characters? ( Read more... )

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2cool4europe January 19 2010, 23:23:29 UTC
My love for playing with you cannot be described in words alone.

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themodestotter January 19 2010, 23:24:55 UTC
This obviously calls for interpretive dance

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misstakin January 19 2010, 23:14:21 UTC
Azula || Avatar: The Last Airbender || bends-lighting || HMD
She's been quiet lately, but anything you've seen with her characterization would help. This is kind of an inconvenient time as I've only just started trying to get my activity up, so I'd rather not hear about that, but I'm open to anything else.

Kurogane || Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle || mages-game || HMD
He's also been kind of quiet, but again, if you see anything I'd like to hear it.

Eli Bradley || Young Avengers || notquitecap || HMD
I just feel a little wobbly on his voice. I've been working on getting him involved in the police force, but sometimes I feel like I'm putting to much of my own voice into his tags. That's the only thing I'm really worried about with him.

Shuichi Shindou || Gravitation || constantidiot || HMD
The only thing I'm worried about with him is balancing his angry shouting with his uke-ness. Otherwise I know I have to work on his activity a bit.

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ihasastrawhat January 20 2010, 01:41:42 UTC
I only really know two of yours so lol let's focus on them. DADDY IS REALLY CUTE. It's nice seeing Kurogane's protective and gentle side, even past the scowling and the B-line faces and his crabbiness. He's a cute papa.

And Shuichi's a cute bucket. I haven't really read that much into him but he makes me giggle, and I so go yaaaaaay at it all. 8D

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skybound_love January 20 2010, 01:54:25 UTC
Shuichi seems fine to me. He seems right on, even though I read the manga a long time ago. He's a fairly normal, if very loud guy when he's away from Eiri. When he's with him, he switches to appropriately clingy.

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themodestotter January 19 2010, 23:15:07 UTC
Yousuke Hanamura || masukukunai
Kazuki Hihara || ilpresto

FIRST OF ALL, apologies for my activity, holy crap I am a mod I should be doing better than thissss, but I really really am trying to fix it orz I say that every HMD fgdhjakl If you want me around or if I've dropped a thread, I highly, HIGHLY ENCOURAGE bugging me about it, whether on aim or somewhere else because I swear I'll listen. Really seriously. No lie.

Separately, I feel pretty okay with Yousuke? I'm liking his newer cr and I'm gonna try to get him out a little more, but he's getting there. Slowly, ffff aaaaah.

And Kazuki is still depress and that sucks and I need to kick his ass into happiness again because he is no fun playing sad so there. Blurgh. Hopefully I will be able to do that soon! headpats would help, he likes headpats.

PLEASE CRIT ME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I MUST KNOW WHAT PEOPLE THINK. I am here to please you guys, so if something isn't cool I want to knowwwww

Oh and they both have crit posts up on their journals if you'd like to use those instead. ♥

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lunchpenalty January 20 2010, 01:35:11 UTC
/headpats Kazuki

I love him when he's happy, but I also like his sadness. You can't be happy forever, right?

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themodestotter January 20 2010, 02:02:06 UTC
I don't know man.

We are talking about Kazuki here.

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blameshimself January 20 2010, 02:10:05 UTC
Well then Kazuki is an unnatural person. ;o; /MAKES. HIM. HAPPY.

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witchoftheweek January 19 2010, 23:48:11 UTC
I don't necessarily read every comment, but I don't see much gibberish. XD

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witchoftheweek January 20 2010, 00:02:55 UTC
XD That is a problem!

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2cool4europe January 19 2010, 23:15:12 UTC
Prussia || Axis Powers: Hetalia || 2cool4europe

As you may have already noticed, I’ve been extremely inactive since, like… November. Despite Denmark’s (amazing) attempts, that paid account from an Anon (thank you so much), and the RPS (thank you, Ops) to get me back in the game, I’m really, like… Five seconds from dropping. I don’t know what to do ahhhh. I don’t know if it’s because I’m burnt out or stressed from school or just losing my touch or what. I really, really, really don’t know. I’m just a total mess and have, like, no motivation.

If I can’t get my act together in the next month, I’m dropping. Character-sitting just isn’t fair. But I love this game so much and ahhhh help. Oh my God, help me. /sob

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2cool4europe January 19 2010, 23:18:22 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO that's like cheating on an exam.

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