✘ HOW'S MY RPING?
Try to keep these things in mind while you're critting:
1) What do you enjoy about the person's character, and why? INSTEAD of just: "omg, I love your Bob!" we'd like to see more, "omg, I love your Bob because his interactions with Stacey's mom are absolutely hilarious2) What do you want to see more of from the characters?
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I still haven't played Crisis Core on sheer principle that after advent children and Dirge of Cerberus I'm reluctant to see my childhood inappropriately fondled further by Nomura, but if Genesis in the game is anything like yours, you definitely have my interest piqued. I really love his almost love-triangly-but-not relationship with Angeal and Seph, and you guys have a fantastic dynamic together.
I haven't noticed much inconsistency with his personality either, so I don't think gibberish is coming out late at night. If that is the case, I've probably marked it down to his very lyrical and darkly almost-whimsical way of speaking.
Basically, keep rawkin'.
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Anon because I'm too intimidated to comment on your Genesis' entries with my character :[ but I like reading what he posts. You make him sound so beautiful.
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I haven't gotten Aerith to tag him yet (that's my own fail, hopefully I'll sort it out sometime) but I'm glad you brought him back.
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It was a polite friendship and he did enjoy talking to her, not that he'd ever admit it. And he'll probably tag her again if he sees her post because he'll remember her.
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