One Direction fic | Soft Like Circles Strong Like Squares | Harry/Lous | ~ 4,750 words | NC-17

Oct 22, 2013 23:17

Soft Like Circles Strong Like Squares
Harry/Louis | NC-17 | ~4,750 words | A/B/O AU
The producers took a risk putting an alpha in the group, but alpha exposure in the media had been increasingly trendy and Harry was sweet for an alpha. They always said it like that -- sweet for an alpha. Polite for an alpha. Smart for an alpha.Epic gratitude and ( Read more... )

one direction fic, pairing: harry/louis, fic, au, boybands: there is no cure

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inure October 23 2013, 07:09:31 UTC
THIS IS SO AMAZING. I AM SPEECHLESS RIGHT NOW. AJDFJG.

I absolutely loved this 'verse and how this society painted alphas as the degenerates with no self control instead of omegas, as per usual in typical a/b/o fics. I love, love, love how you went and did your own 180 flip of how the trope is usually carried out (!!!!!)

Also, a lot of the times in a/b/o you lose the characters in their roles/set-out dynamics like if you swapped names with completely different characters in a completely different fandom the fic characterization would be exactly the same so long as you keep the alpha/or the omega the same. But that wasn't the case here, you kept in tact their personalities so well I almost thought this was canon for a sec lol \o/ Like, how Harry was still so tactile and how much he needed to be loved and included and how caught up in Louis because how affectionate he was with him even though he was an alpha. And your Louis was glorious. He was bossy, so affectionate, and totally in control of him and Harry's whole dynamic even though he was an ~omega. He still was in charge and that was part of why I think this fic really /clicked/ with me. He wasn't just in heat and losing all of his wits and succumbing to Harry's whims, he was still Louis and still 100% in control. Also Harry's pain kink!!! UGH, THIS WAS JUST SO SO GOOD. I DON'T THINK I'M ARTICULATING THIS PROPERLY BUT THIS WAS.

I also loved all the little things, like Liam sitting down and watching A-Squared with Harry because he's progressive and fully there for Harry and loves him despite his nature, and how the producers didn't want Harry in the same room with them, how none of the boys really had that much sex but Harry had, how ingrained it was in Harry that being an alpha was shameful and wrong. The intricacy was so beautiful and subtle *chinhands* I spent most of this fic just wanting to give poor Harry a hug and tell him he wasn't just another alpha stereotype even if he thought the way he felt about Louis made him one. I COULD RAMBLE ABOUT THIS FOR AGES SHDSJS.

TLDR; basically this was everything and your writing as ever continues to be incredible. Loveliest 'verse I've read in ages and I could read 50k more of this and not get bored!

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