Cold light of morning
Brendon/Ryan | NC-17 | ~ 4000 words |
Brendon wakes to Ryan's hand stroking softly across his stomach.
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theaerosolkid. Telis and I were talking about how awesome Spencer/Brendon is and how fabulous genderswaps are (okay, maybe not exactly, but that's how I like to remember the conversation) and I said, dude, you should write some
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Somehow it's just terrible that I'm not guilty at all because, Goddamn, I totally got the better end of this deal. Don't even try to convince me otherwise, dude. I know they're not your OTP, but man. I couldn't tell, reading this. It was just pretty and perfect and gorgeous and lovely and fucking HOT, ohh, God, I have no clue why you had any anxiety about the snowballing, because it was so glorious there aren't words. And then tasty delicious rimming! Augh, so hot, so awesome. I can't even.
Fuck you! This was too good <333 I am now your willing slave, you can get just about anything out of me now.
On a more coherent note? I really adore the ending, because it's sweet without being cloying and I think that you picked the absolute fucking best moment to end the fic. It really felt like this nice private glance into their world, and to stop just short of that last moment of intimacy was really perfect ( ... )
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I know they're not your OTP, but man. I couldn't tell, reading this. That's excellent. Because I was writing this for you, and I know that they are your OTP! :)
I'm so glad that you liked it. I was honestly kind of worried because this isn't really in my ... comfort zone. I don't know how to describe that really. But. Yay! I'm so happy. \o/ for a successful attempt at writing snowballing.
I'm glad you didn't find it too cloying. You asked for fluff, and that's what you got (oh god, so fluffy), but I'm glad it worked okay for you.
To repeat: <3333333333333333333333333333333
PS YOUR ICON. AND OUR WIP. AND OH MY FUCKING GOD. HAHHAHAH, BUT ALSO GUH. I CAN'T STOP STARING.
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Yeah, I'm not all about the Brendon/Ryan, but I do what I have to do to get genderswap! hahahha. I'm really got that it worked okay for you anyway! <3
... hmmm. *is intrigued.* The thing is, I don't know if I can write Spencer/Jon. Not to diss your OTP, but. *wibbles*
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I'M SO SORRY! I STILL LOVE *YOU*.
... Yeah. Um. I couldn't write that. Gabe's a creepy mofo. *:S
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Make up your mind before it's gone?
It was on my phone history for some reason.
I truly, truly worship you.
<333
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My mind is blank, braindead.
I think I could write a fic on how your stories make me feel.
I feel so hugely, hugely emotionally and mentally drained.
You just..
You have this..
Fuck.
It's just fucking..
You made boiisecks into an emotionally significant act.
And your imagery is just amazing.
And...
Mmf. I'm scared of saying anything else, in case it doesn't do this justice.
<333
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I'm glad that the imagery worked for you, and that you found the sex to be emotionally significant. I was hoping it would work that way. :)
Thank you! <3<3<3
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And, the ending. So very pretty. The whole ending paragraph, actually. I loved it so very much.
Thanks for posting this wonderful fic.
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It's awesome to hear that you enjoyed the ending. :)
<3
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imagery = perfect.
i absolutely love how you described the morning. love. the way the fog turned to dew on the spiderwebs and how the light came down and how perfectly amazing it was for ryan and brendon to kiss out in the open even if no one was there to see and *keyboardsmashdfpoiahwpdoi* i'm rambling. love it.
(oh and the blowjob/rimming was explicitly perfect as well but honestly i think that goes without saying.)
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THANK YOU! <3
(I'm glad to hear it anyway. I was a bit worried about writing it, so I'm glad to hear that it worked alright!)
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