oh my god, that was RIDICULOUSLY CUTE. ♥_♥ i loved mcr's cameo, especially. and Spencer being HIGHLY SUSPICIOUS of someone with such big hair operating on Brendon's brain. the whole fic was a very fun read!
ILU and this!!! here, let me notate a few of the things i especially love: → the negotiations! i love how you keep working with that idea of negotiating a new relationship throughout the whole thing, from when spencer and brendon first meet up through the very end (and beyond, i'm sure, haha) → gabe the lecherous AI, ahahaha! → how the first time, when brendon's trying to get spencer to do something with him, anything, it's simultaneously ridiculously hot and pretty disturbing--hot because it's brendon saying those things, but disturbing because of why he's saying them, and how spencer gets that immediately and just wants everything to be good for brendon
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→ I am glad that the negotiation stuff worked for you! And Gabe! → You know, after I finished writing the story I was tempted to take out the whole sex-part of Brendon having a chip in his head. That's the whole premise that I started writing the story because of, but then I kind of just wanted to get rid of it. I think I'm glad that I didn't though. → Yay! I'm glad the Ryan/Jon and Spencer&Ryan parts worked for you. I know that Ryan and Jon didn't have the hugest roles in the story, but I liked thinking about Spencer having people like that in his life. → hahaha, I totally had fun throwing in random canon things, so I'm glad if that worked!
oh man, I don't even know if I meant for that to be a joke or not, but, ahahah, yes. Water. Dry. I do get it! :P
Thank you so much! I'm glad that the world worked for you, even though it wasn't too, too futuristic. I tried to have a bit of that stuff in there, but I'm not a scifi writer, so I really had no idea what I was doing.
I'm very glad you're not a sci-fi writer, as I'm not really into sci-fi. ;) This was a perfect amount, I like the way you hinted at things but didn't really overload on the detail, just focused on the people. I really love your writing. :)
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I think I forgot to tell you this before, but Gabe as the navigation system was A+.
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ILU and this!!! here, let me notate a few of the things i especially love:
→ the negotiations! i love how you keep working with that idea of negotiating a new relationship throughout the whole thing, from when spencer and brendon first meet up through the very end (and beyond, i'm sure, haha)
→ gabe the lecherous AI, ahahaha!
→ how the first time, when brendon's trying to get spencer to do something with him, anything, it's simultaneously ridiculously hot and pretty disturbing--hot because it's brendon saying those things, but disturbing because of why he's saying them, and how spencer gets that immediately and just wants everything to be good for brendon ( ... )
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→ I am glad that the negotiation stuff worked for you! And Gabe!
→ You know, after I finished writing the story I was tempted to take out the whole sex-part of Brendon having a chip in his head. That's the whole premise that I started writing the story because of, but then I kind of just wanted to get rid of it. I think I'm glad that I didn't though.
→ Yay! I'm glad the Ryan/Jon and Spencer&Ryan parts worked for you. I know that Ryan and Jon didn't have the hugest roles in the story, but I liked thinking about Spencer having people like that in his life.
→ hahaha, I totally had fun throwing in random canon things, so I'm glad if that worked!
oh man, I don't even know if I meant for that to be a joke or not, but, ahahah, yes. Water. Dry. I do get it! :P
Thanks so much for this awesome comment, ♥!
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The world is really interesting, futuristic, but not too much, I like it. :)
Gabe was an awesome touch, brilliant.
And I love the Ryan and Jon bits, and Spencer cooking them. <3
And Brendon and Spencer were awesome, though, Spencer was annoyingly stupid for a while there. ;)
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Thank you so much!
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