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octette November 18 2008, 02:45:22 UTC
BRENDON WITH HIS HANDS TIED BEHIND HIS BACK. NNNGGH. yes. i love this!

"It's fucking hot how much you like this," Shane says

YES IT IS, SHANE.

it's also fucking hot how much shane liked hitting brendon, and tying him up, and ordering him around.

and also brendon going STILL. ♥____♥

thank you!!!

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disarm_d November 21 2008, 05:31:48 UTC
I think that both Brendon and Shane would VERY MUCH enjoy events such as these, as I VERY MUCH enjoyed writing them. :) I'm glad you liked it. I was kind of just going along writing and hoping for the best. \o/ Thank you.

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I feel really awkward about feedbacking porn... revelininsanity November 18 2008, 03:40:15 UTC
I wish I could be all thinky, but unfortunately, all I can say is, "WOW. THAT WAS HOT."

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Re: I feel really awkward about feedbacking porn... revelininsanity November 18 2008, 03:42:04 UTC
Oh, and I liked how Shane was all, "Drunken hookups?" :(

And Brendon was all, "CONFUZED, KTHNX." o.O :(

And then they were all, "YAY! NOT DRUNK!LOVINGS!" :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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Re: I feel really awkward about feedbacking porn... disarm_d November 21 2008, 05:32:27 UTC
Thanks for reading! :)

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Re: I feel really awkward about feedbacking porn... disarm_d November 21 2008, 05:32:11 UTC
Hee! Well, that's good to hear!

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ryrolovesbden November 18 2008, 04:08:42 UTC
I. fucking. love. this.
I've been WAITING for a story like this -- thank you!! <333

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disarm_d November 21 2008, 05:32:45 UTC
I'm so glad that you liked it! That's really awesome. Thank you so much!

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greeenlikejuly November 18 2008, 04:46:21 UTC
i think there's a definite shift between the first part where they're all faily, and the second part where they're into each other and trying things out, and i really liked that. i also liked that they were in that space between casual hook up and boyfriends.

there is nothing bad about brendon and shane being kinky boyfriends. their love is epic.

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disarm_d November 21 2008, 05:33:52 UTC
I didn't realize that I was actually going to have to post this in two parts, so when I was posting it, I had to figure out where I wanted to split it. I'm glad that the division spot ended up being appropriate.

Their love IS epic. :) Thanks for commenting!

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thepouncer November 18 2008, 04:47:35 UTC
I don't smoke and I still feel like I should go find a cigarette. Yowsers!

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disarm_d November 22 2008, 04:25:39 UTC
*grins* Thanks for reading!

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