Comments | disarm_d: Prickly Pear | Ryan/Brendon | NC-17

disarm_d

Prickly Pear | Ryan/Brendon | NC-17 | ~ 4700 words |

Sep 03, 2008 10:48

Prickly Pear
Brendon/Ryan | NC-17 | ~ 4700 words
Sometimes it's harder to remember where the line is though, when it's just the two of them.

Thank you so much to elfiepike and sociofemme for betaing! ♥♥♥

( It was only like four when they started smoking, but Ryan's pretty sure it's been quite a few hours since then. )

pairing: brendon/ryan, fic

Comments 90

sparkfrost September 3 2008, 18:36:57 UTC

I really liked this. Ryan's stoned logic was great, as was the thoughts of approaching but never crossing That Line.

Also, hot as hell. :)

disarm_d September 4 2008, 22:16:46 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D

nyquil_love September 3 2008, 18:49:55 UTC

Oh my God, Laura, oh my God!
Is it my birthday?
Did you just write stoned Ryan and Brendon 69ing?!
I love you so much for this.
♥

So hot!!
Why do I have to be at work right now?

The fact that they were going to call someone to find out what time it was made me love this from the start.
Either you were high while writing this, or you took notes last time you were stoned, because yes!
And the beer being too tingly...omg, I love everything about this.

I also love that Ryan so wanted to suck Brendon's dick that he decided they should do it together.
Seriously, you are my official hero this week.

disarm_d September 4 2008, 22:18:20 UTC

Hee! Well, I'm really glad that you liked it.

Either you were high while writing this, or you took notes last time you were stoned, because yes!
hahahha, I'm going to plead the fifth!

Thank you so much! :D

xsnarkasaurus September 3 2008, 18:51:41 UTC

♥__♥

disarm_d September 4 2008, 22:18:35 UTC

itsallhushhush September 3 2008, 18:51:46 UTC

Aww this was awesomely awesome!

People hardly ever write 69ing and it's sad because it's awesome!

Ryan hates being on top anyway, hates having his balls swinging in someone's face. -- That just made me laugh so hard, idek!

disarm_d September 4 2008, 22:19:19 UTC

I'm really glad that you liked it! Thank you very much.

withherlipsonly November 8 2008, 22:01:34 UTC

Both of these icons make me want to stare. And stare. And stare.

Just. Brendon's lips. You know?

jawice24 September 3 2008, 19:10:18 UTC

ohhh, awesome. i liked the whole feel to it, the slightly-stoned and kind of easy way they fell into this even though... not. lol idk if you get what i mean to say but just know that this was really really great ♥

"Probably I won't be leaking this to the media," Ryan says.
hahaha perfect

disarm_d September 4 2008, 22:19:58 UTC

Yeah, I do know what you're saying. That's how I was hoping it would feel.

Thanks a lot! :D