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dhamphir

Weak in the Knees; chapter forty-two

Apr 13, 2009 03:59

Title: Weak in the Knees

Author: Dhamphir

Fandom: X-Files

Pairing: Scully/OFC

Rating: NC-17
Please see previous posts for disclaimer/summary/notes. Special thanks to bara_brith. As always, thanks to celievamp for the beta.

( Chapter 42 )

fic, character: dana scully, fandom: x-files, pairing: scully/morgan, pairing: scully/ofc, weak in the knees, rating: nc17, character: jessica morgan, character: ofc

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dhamphir April 13 2009, 09:50:32 UTC

LOL. Well I can guarentee you she sure as hell wouldn't like it. :D

ablatedcrayon April 13 2009, 11:39:31 UTC

Sweet. Morgan was definitely right to call in some help finding his hidden property, and smart to look at all in the first place ( ... )

dhamphir April 13 2009, 12:00:50 UTC

"I also think using "IL" instead of Illinois is a little bit misleading since Taylor is obviously saying the full word aloud, not the two letters 'I' and 'L'."

Actually, that slipped right by me. Thanks for letting me know. It's been corrected.

About the SAC thing: 'SAC' was used, and defined as 'Special Agent in Charge' in chapter 32. However, I'm not dismissing your point. I didn't go into any details about their responsibilities, because Jess is not actively thinking about taking the job at this point. When, and IF, she considers taking a SAC position, rest assured more information would revealed.

I do not mind constructive feedback. Yes, it's nice to know you still think "this story rocks!!!" :D But there's always room to improve. Thx.

kazza1269 April 13 2009, 12:22:14 UTC

Love the intrigue. I can't see Jess sitting at her desk while her love goes off with Casper. I'm so glad I checked for you update before I headed to bed. I have a conference all this week out of state, so I'm going to have to wait to catch up on all the suspense when I get back. Still loving the story, great work.

dhamphir April 13 2009, 12:28:08 UTC

Staying behind while Dana goes off... That is something Jess would definitely chafe at! Especially since they've just worked things out and have gotten on the right track.

sinjenkai April 13 2009, 13:44:52 UTC

I should have stay up one more hour. Great update.

dhamphir April 13 2009, 14:00:51 UTC

Thank you. (And I need to get some sleep!)

geekgrrllurking April 13 2009, 13:45:28 UTC

Yay an update! You just made my Monday brighter :)

Great chapter. I can't wait to find out just how much both Dana and Jess have been affected by sharing blood. And as it continues over time how that will change them as well?

And they are closer to getting the bad guy. Gotta love it!

dhamphir April 13 2009, 14:02:57 UTC

"You just made my Monday brighter :)"
Aw, that's cool. Glad you're still enjoying the story!