Death Becomes Him for aleoninc

Aug 06, 2007 19:05

Title: Death Becomes Him
Author/Artist: keeloca
Recipient: aleoninc
Prompt: Harry takes on the responsibility of seeing to it that Snape's portrait installed at Hogwarts (lots of 2D snark welcome)
Warnings or notes: I forgot about this, so I had no time to let my beta take a look at it. English is not my native language, so bear with the occasionally ( Read more... )

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aleoninc August 7 2007, 00:11:39 UTC
Hehehee! This was absolutely perfect! Just the right amount of snark and oh, how I needed that. XD

I laughed all the way through, but I especially liked these parts:

It had seemed such an easy promise to make. More than easy: decent, necessary. Something expected of a hero. And he was grateful for, and impressed by, all the things Snape had done for him and for Dumbledore and for the school, so he had been happy to volunteer, glad for the chance to do something for the man who had sacrificed so much to keep the son of his beloved safe.

Safe and miserable, Harry added mutinously

And, of course:

"Well"” Harry had said hesitantly, eying the picture. "He doesn't look very nice, does he ( ... )

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keeloca August 7 2007, 18:54:06 UTC
This is only my second HP fic, actually - used to write nothing but Star Wars. However, I am currently wroking on a fic taking place directly after DH, and you can find the two first chapters in my journal.

I have a Snape/Remus fic but I need to have someone beta it before I post it. But sooner or later, you'll find that as well.

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vimeslady August 15 2007, 17:03:27 UTC
Hurray! The world so needs much more Snupin!

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mindabbles August 7 2007, 06:30:18 UTC
Very nice last line! But, I think I loved Ron most.

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shiiki August 7 2007, 12:51:31 UTC
Oh that is perfect! Brilliant story!

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mnemosyne_1 August 7 2007, 13:28:17 UTC
LOL - I love this... Snape being all snarky, and Harry determined to do the right thing. Also, forgetting the levitation charm and Snape purposely not reminding him was great. *g*

“I hope he doesn’t,” Ron muttered. “Snape smiling never meant anything good.”

Loved that line!

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