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Comments

[quantum_rainbow]

beautifully written.

you just made me want to re-read Dante. hmmmm

[desecration_row]

i forgot to make it private.. i only posted it so i could print it at school :P

[lucid_ignorance]

i did the creative option so i could bitch about the story.

[desecration_row]

i forgot to make it private... i only posted it so i could print it at school :P

[lucid_ignorance]

...isn't it kinda short?

[desecration_row]

short is a relative term..................

[comelanieve]

nice dude

all the following are stupid or incorrect. often both.

[trireme]

"a literal and moral levels"

"paints deep implications... in multiple forms of understanding"

"an angel... which"

"the literal level of the plot is simply that of an angel..."

"the theological principle of salvation, the purpose of the journey, only through gods grace is the foundation in relaizing correlation from religious ideology to the literal movement of the story" -- now this one doesn't even make sense. verbs are neccesary.

"virgil, a paradigm of secular enlightenment and the apex..." the thesaurus will get you nowhere. and if you didn't use one in this case, then a dictionary would have gotten you everywhere.

"incapable of saving or assuaging the pilgrim IN..."

"both morally and theological..."

i hope you turned this in already, because anyone who thinks he can fool people by saying "i forgot to make it private.. i only posted it so i could print it at school :P" deserves an F.

Re: all the following are stupid or incorrect. often both.

[desecration_row]

haha.. thanks for your comments!
it must feel nice to point out the shortcomings of kids who don't own printers....ass

[finnekee]

point being that you could have made it private after your first ass-kissing session ("beautifully written. you make me want to read dante &c."), but you're obviously proud of it and want to extract as much from your ignorant friends as possible by way of flattery.

anyway i'm not sure what you're implying. should i be nicer to you because you don't have a printer? is THAT why all those people keep verbally fellating you? are you afraid of the real world?

[desecration_row]

I just don't get it:

I fear the real world, but you start shit up on livejournal?
on livejournal and from across the fucking atlanitc.

i refuse to argue online. its stupid
start shit up in person and maybe your words will have some worth