In which there is entirely too much dialogue, Fero (er, Miratge) gets to play Exposition Fairy, and I use the words 'sharp' and 'cutting' at least four million times each. *headdesk*

... This chapter is going to undergo severe revisions once NaNo is over and I begin the editing process. But in the meantime, enjoy the exposition. 'Cause things ( Read more... )

I can't believe I actually knocked out the prologue. Finally. The story actually feels real, now, and that's more than a little terrifying.

Okay, guys, here's the drill: this is a draft. A very, very rough draft. I've proofread it once for typos, but otherwise I'm posting it now in its very raw stage. Everything is subject to change at any ( Read more... )