Horse contest.
I would really appreciate help. Proof readers? On you mark, get set go.
Let me remind you, it can only be 300 words long. And the topic is "Arabian horses have excelled in many different disciplines. Choose a famous Arabian athlete and describe its talents and specific achievements and describe what you would do with "your" Arabian should you win one. Give the history of a reining horse, endurance horse, show horse, olympic competitor, etc."
Imagine one of the most heavenly horses of the Arabian breed prancing through the other end of the gate, making his grand entrance, evoking the people in the crowds into subliminal bliss. A large mahogany bay with four white infinite stocking and a broad blaze, the new found quintessence of the Arabian horse, now American bred.
On the night of May 13, 1967, the star was born in the backyard of an ordinary couple's home, which, with this new horse, grew to be part of this extraordinary legend.
Khemosabi, the son of Amerigo and Jurneeka, started off small but soon became the name on everyone's lips. He was literally a "show ring superstar" winning U.S. and Canada national championships in both stallion halter and performance, the first to ever win both. His list of championships goes as follows: 1973 U.S. National Champion Stallion, 1976 U.S. and Canadian National Western Pleasure Champion and 1976 Canadian National Champion. With an extensive list of other wins, he also won the highest IAHA lifetime achievement award offered, the Legion of Masters, of which only a handful of horses have achieved.
On top of that, Khemosabi has passed on his show ring elegance and his charming temperament to an astoundingly high percentage of his offspring. In total, Khemosabi sired more than 1,200 purebred Arabians; of which 300 have won championships in every event conceivable.
If I had an Arabian horse of my own, it would make my life as vivacious as Khemosabi in the show ring. I would dream big dreams, like Khemosabi's owners. I would plan on showing in local and Arabian shows and I'd ride three days a week. I'd bake cookies for my horse, and groom him until he glistens. But most of all, I'll love him very much.
Imagine one of the most heavenly horses of the Arabian breed prancing through the other end of the gate, making his grand entrance, evoking the people in the crowds into subliminal bliss. A large mahogany bay with four white infinite stockings and a broad blaze, the new found quintessence of the Arabian horse, now American bred.
On the night of May 13, 1967, the star was born in the backyard of an ordinary couple's home.
Khemosabi, the son of Amerigo and Jurneeka, started off small but soon became the name on everyone's lips. He was literally a "show ring superstar" winning U.S. and Canada national championships in both stallion halter and performance, the first to ever win both. His list of championships goes as follows: 1973 U.S. National Champion Stallion, 1976 U.S. and Canadian National Western Pleasure Champion and 1976 Canadian National Champion. With an extensive list of other wins, he also won the highest IAHA lifetime achievement award offered, the Legion of Masters, of which only a handful of horses have achieved.
On top of that, Khemosabi has passed on his show ring elegance and his charming temperament to an astoundingly high percentage of his offspring. In total, Khemosabi sired more than 1,200 purebred Arabians; of which 300 have won championships in every event conceivable.
If I had an Arabian horse of my own, it would make my life as vivacious as Khemosabi in the show ring. I would plan on showing in local and Arabian shows and I'd ride three days a week. I'd bake cookies for my horse, and groom him until he glistens. But most of all, I'll love him very much.
Khemosabi was not just a pretty horse, or a national champion. But essentially, he was extremely loved, and I can promise my horse that.
(Exactly 300)
{edit: hey guys, it made my mom cry a bit. so hopefully, its that good..}
Let me remind you, it can only be 300 words long. And the topic is "Arabian horses have excelled in many different disciplines. Choose a famous Arabian athlete and describe its talents and specific achievements and describe what you would do with "your" Arabian should you win one. Give the history of a reining horse, endurance horse, show horse, olympic competitor, etc."
Imagine one of the most heavenly horses of the Arabian breed prancing through the other end of the gate, making his grand entrance, evoking the people in the crowds into subliminal bliss. A large mahogany bay with four white infinite stocking and a broad blaze, the new found quintessence of the Arabian horse, now American bred.
On the night of May 13, 1967, the star was born in the backyard of an ordinary couple's home, which, with this new horse, grew to be part of this extraordinary legend.
Khemosabi, the son of Amerigo and Jurneeka, started off small but soon became the name on everyone's lips. He was literally a "show ring superstar" winning U.S. and Canada national championships in both stallion halter and performance, the first to ever win both. His list of championships goes as follows: 1973 U.S. National Champion Stallion, 1976 U.S. and Canadian National Western Pleasure Champion and 1976 Canadian National Champion. With an extensive list of other wins, he also won the highest IAHA lifetime achievement award offered, the Legion of Masters, of which only a handful of horses have achieved.
On top of that, Khemosabi has passed on his show ring elegance and his charming temperament to an astoundingly high percentage of his offspring. In total, Khemosabi sired more than 1,200 purebred Arabians; of which 300 have won championships in every event conceivable.
If I had an Arabian horse of my own, it would make my life as vivacious as Khemosabi in the show ring. I would dream big dreams, like Khemosabi's owners. I would plan on showing in local and Arabian shows and I'd ride three days a week. I'd bake cookies for my horse, and groom him until he glistens. But most of all, I'll love him very much.
Imagine one of the most heavenly horses of the Arabian breed prancing through the other end of the gate, making his grand entrance, evoking the people in the crowds into subliminal bliss. A large mahogany bay with four white infinite stockings and a broad blaze, the new found quintessence of the Arabian horse, now American bred.
On the night of May 13, 1967, the star was born in the backyard of an ordinary couple's home.
Khemosabi, the son of Amerigo and Jurneeka, started off small but soon became the name on everyone's lips. He was literally a "show ring superstar" winning U.S. and Canada national championships in both stallion halter and performance, the first to ever win both. His list of championships goes as follows: 1973 U.S. National Champion Stallion, 1976 U.S. and Canadian National Western Pleasure Champion and 1976 Canadian National Champion. With an extensive list of other wins, he also won the highest IAHA lifetime achievement award offered, the Legion of Masters, of which only a handful of horses have achieved.
On top of that, Khemosabi has passed on his show ring elegance and his charming temperament to an astoundingly high percentage of his offspring. In total, Khemosabi sired more than 1,200 purebred Arabians; of which 300 have won championships in every event conceivable.
If I had an Arabian horse of my own, it would make my life as vivacious as Khemosabi in the show ring. I would plan on showing in local and Arabian shows and I'd ride three days a week. I'd bake cookies for my horse, and groom him until he glistens. But most of all, I'll love him very much.
Khemosabi was not just a pretty horse, or a national champion. But essentially, he was extremely loved, and I can promise my horse that.
(Exactly 300)
{edit: hey guys, it made my mom cry a bit. so hopefully, its that good..}