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No im not going to update. but i am going to post poetry hw so that someone or anyone can critique them and tell me what to do different. thanks
Eyes Shut by Sean 'Diddy' Kersey
Smiling to me flirting with eyes
Adept in ways of mute speaking
I see afar those lips no lies
Blush on, soft hair, it’s her| Sweet thing
A glimpse is caught from far away
Words not needed for this moment
For her I feel the need to stay
My heart has longed, laying dormant
All this moment fraction of time
My heart jump twice I’m lost inside
Tis brief, simple eyes met, not mine
No nerve to glance, inside I cried
For all that I feel about you
Can not be said, for eyes shy too
Eyes Shut by Sean 'Diddy' Kersey
Smiling to me flirting with eyes
Adept in ways of mute speaking
I see afar those lips no lies
Blush on, soft hair, it’s her| Sweet thing
A glimpse is caught from far away
Words not needed for this moment
For her I feel the need to stay
My heart has longed, laying dormant
All this moment fraction of time
My heart jump twice I’m lost inside
Tis brief, simple eyes met, not mine
No nerve to glance, inside I cried
For all that I feel about you
Can not be said, for eyes shy too