Dark Angel Fic: Ball-In-Hand; Contest Entry

[definewisdom]

Title: Ball-In-Hand (aka. When Pool Balls Go Bad)
Author: Mariana O'Connor
Characters: Alec, Sketchey and a pool ball
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don't own Dark Angel... or any of the characters therein. Although I do have a secret plot involving Alec, some heavy duty tranquiliser and my understairs cupboard.
Summary: Sometimes it's a good idea to quit

Comments

[ishara]

Hahahahaha!
That's cracked out, but oh so entertaining *grin*

Poor Alec, even the balls are conspiring against him :D

[definewisdom]

I know. I have no idea where the idea came from. I just wanted to do something different, then it kind of... ran away with me. ^_^;; heh!

Thanks for the review.

[last01standing]

Hee! Crack! This fic made me giggle.

[definewisdom]

Yay! Giggling!

There can never be enough crack in the world!

Thanks.

[candycentric]

ROFL! Superb idea! ;)

[definewisdom]

I aim to amuse *bows* Thank you very much!

[savannahjan]

except for the fact he was a genetically engineered killing machine - sorry - one of the genetically enpowered.
Loved that line!

After all Max had not killed him yet and anyone could see she was trying.
LOL

the cue ball (smirking to itself)
LOL!!! Best personification ever!!!

The next shot, however, even a sentient cue ball could not save him from
LOL, I'm loving these lines! You do great humorous writing!

Sadly, because it didn’t have a mouth, no one could hear its scream.
Great last line!!

This was a fun story! Thanks for sharing.