How A Heart Breaks-Chapter Thirty

May 20, 2008 04:57

Title: How A Heart Breaks ( Read more... )

vam, smut sad

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meduusje May 20 2008, 09:05:09 UTC
sigh
well it really is a fitting end
sad?
yes
but still fitting
poor lily, staying behind sucks
i loved this story :)

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deeperintodark May 21 2008, 02:33:00 UTC
Thank you much, my darling.

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lillithvalo May 20 2008, 12:44:45 UTC
OMG!! AGAIN!?
I'm starting to think your stories never end happily.. *sniff*

I love all your works though.. *snuggles*

write more soon

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deeperintodark May 21 2008, 02:35:19 UTC
Kiss Me Ended Happily!

Wait, didn't it?

Thank you for loving this stuff. *cuddles*

I will.

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unloved_metal May 20 2008, 13:46:12 UTC
dude, that so sad, its not that the story was sad just the timimg of the chap.

But i love it, because i love tragedy,

Any new story ideas or whathaveyou?

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deeperintodark May 21 2008, 02:47:29 UTC
I do have a couple new story ideas, but I'm scared that they might be over done.

I'm so glad you liked this.

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deeperintodark May 21 2008, 02:48:28 UTC
*plays in rose petals* I love black roses!

Thank you for loving this.

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slasher48 May 20 2008, 22:09:14 UTC
Oh, the awful.

Not you, my love. The plot. I would never want to lose Ville, though in this case I understand. No matter when or where he's written, he and Bam are meant to be, and if one of them does not accept that...the other chooses death. It's only natural.

That kind of love just cannot be denied without crushing pain.

You wrote the note wonderfully, darling. And I love you.

I'm sad to see this end...but happy to know that there is more to come from you. ♥

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deeperintodark May 21 2008, 02:52:09 UTC
I'll be honest and say this is my senior year, just about verbatim.

I didn't kill myself (hurrr. Dead people don't type), but all the misery and pain Ville went through, I went through.

More or less, this was me getting rid of the last of that relationship, or nonrelationship, however you choose to look at it.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not unhappy or in agony or anything... I just really needed to do this to let myself know that I'm done with that now.

Thank you for reading.

I love you.

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slasher48 May 21 2008, 19:26:37 UTC
That doesn't surprise me. We write what we know the best. And I'm just glad you made it and didn't succumb like Ville did. Imagine where we'd all be if you had! O.O

*snort* I know. Yes, I understand. I'm so sorry you, the lovely, had to go through it. *pets*

Good way to do it too. ^^

Oh, I know. And you did it. Congratulations, my love.

You're welcome. No need to ever thank me. I read for my own selfish gain, especially when they're this good. ;)

I love you too.

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