Dandy in the Underworld - 2

Oct 06, 2013 03:37

Part Two )

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peepingdru November 4 2013, 04:42:32 UTC
Enthralling..loved it....000x0x00x0x0

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dear_tiger November 4 2013, 04:54:02 UTC
Oh wow, you read fast! :D Thank you very much.

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triceybabe November 4 2013, 05:48:00 UTC
This was so cool!! I don't know why it never accured to me that Sam was the dragon!! lol Great story telling, I loved this so much.

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dear_tiger November 4 2013, 05:58:21 UTC
Hehe, thank you, I'm happy to hear the diversion plot worked out :D

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indiachick November 4 2013, 07:56:56 UTC
Ah, I was going to ask if the name-choice Ivan is a Russian fairy-tale shout-out but then you mentioned that in the notes \o/

EEEEE. Even knowing what was going on, this fic was still SO. MUCH. FUN. Fake BDSM for the win! It's cryptic in the best possible way, so that the final denouement (awesome scene!) makes perfect sense and slots everything into place. And I love the details in this: the dilapidated old house and the dried-up well, the leather and chains, the room with the ugly candles, and heh, "incestous hillbilly cannibals". Ivan's POV is great-- showing us both what we're already familiar with (albeit in our happy, shippy way) and what's really freaky. Poor guy had his fair share of horror though. The whole thing from his eyes is almost hysterical. He comes across as the spoiled brat who drawls his speech (and thinks "Suga Suga" is sexy) but also probably has an imagination that Sam and Dean could easily utilize. His Uncle Cornelius sounds like a great dude. :D And as always, your Sam and Dean are great. They're funny, and ( ... )

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dear_tiger November 4 2013, 09:00:38 UTC
Kudos for catching the reference in Ivan's name :D You'd know fairytales! And thank you so much for all the lovely feedback. You knew the twist, of course, so I'm particularly happy that you found it all to be a lot of fun. And that you like the chicken bone dragon - isn't that the coolest drawing of it? :D Cassiopeia7 drew those large rodent incisors! I was super pleased and impressed.

Thank you for the loveliest comment. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this.

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paperbackwriter November 4 2013, 09:02:29 UTC
Oooo I love this!
I'm a big fan of the whole fairytale thing so I think that bit really spoke to me (plus, wincest for the win!)
Love the POV and the feeling that we were very much taking the ride with Ivan.
So glad you got talked into seeing this through. It really is super! x

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dear_tiger November 4 2013, 09:16:55 UTC
Fairytales are awesome things, and I love that you love them, too. Thank you for the good words, and especially for letting me know the POV worked well for you. That was a point of concern. I'm glad you liked!

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cassiopeia7 November 4 2013, 11:11:43 UTC
Yeah, baby!! This was just as awesomely creepy on the *mumble* read-through as it was on the first! I don't know how you come up with these scenarios (I'm still creeped out by the bull-man from "Tornado Warning"), but your brain, it rocks. BRAVA!!! \o/

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dear_tiger November 4 2013, 21:22:10 UTC
Ahahaha, the bull-man still creeps you out! :D I love it! Thank you, you did SO MUCH to make this fic better and shinier with the most perfect art ♥

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