Sense

Apr 29, 2009 16:25


Sense [[keeps giving me reasons to love you]]
Changmin//Yoochun ; Yoochun//Junsu
PG-13 ; Angst/Romance ; Band!verse
9, 855 words
Changmin was a rational man... then he met Yoochun
For my super wonderful Read more... )

length: oneshot, p: yoochun/junsu, p: yoochun/changmin, centric: changmin

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xiahwase May 2 2009, 03:13:46 UTC
This... hurts... a lot... T_T

First there is Changmin suffering, then Yoochun, then they get together but then not quite, then the band break up at the end.

I really don't know what hurts the most...
I felt sorry for Min at first and couldn't think of anything else to do other than hit Yoochun hard. But then, Yoochun also suffers from unrequited love and it breaks my heart again.
I confess I didn't like the way Chun proposes to be with Min just because one of them had the right to be happy. From my own experience, in the end, it hurts even more. And it did, and Changmin paid the price.

You know, when chun finally said 'I love you' I didn't feel like he meant it. I'm not sure if its the whole angst surrounding the story or if its just me, but it felt somewhat forced.

And until the end, I still felt like he didn't meant it. At least not all of it. Feels like he loves Min, but not the way he was supposed to. (omg, I can't seem to explain myself, pardon me I'm not making any sense at all hahaha ( ... )

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daynah_bo May 2 2009, 22:00:46 UTC
First off, wow, your comment is not lame at all. I very much enjoyed your thoughts, a wonderful opinion! ♥

ah *hugs* It does hurt - I'm not quite ready for the band to breakup either, that would kill me. And yes, religion is such a... terrible thing at times. They teach that you're supposed to love and treat everyone equally, yet, it doesn't happen. I'm in the same boat with you on that. And when you've grown up thinking and believing the things I'm sure have been pressed upon Junsu, it just hurts to know that it can keep true love apart.

No, Yoochun's reasonings aren't smart, and I feel that it's because he thinks with his heart and not with his head - he's not a very rational person. Changmin is stubborn, and I would believe that if he wasn't so stubborn and in love, he probably would've let Yoochun go... And you are right. Yoochun doesn't love Changmin in the way that Min loves him; more of a platonic love, not the kind he holds for Junsu. I understood what you meant, though, so no worries ( ... )

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xiahwase May 2 2009, 22:55:34 UTC
writing JaeSu is a WONDERFUL thing haha (because JaeSu is also my OTP... yes I have way too many OTPs lol)

and you're welcome ♥

I love to give comments, but sometimes I'm scared people can't understand me since english is not my first language and such and I usually end up writing things that makes no sense at all lol

*sits and waits for JaeSu* lol

Line ♥

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daynah_bo May 3 2009, 01:17:26 UTC
oh, it's nice to have so many otps ;P i'm just glad someone would be willing to read my jaesu once i write it :D ♥

don't worry, i speak english as my native language, and still have a terrible time at making sense of my words xD

*hugs* *gets to work on jaesu*

♥ friends?

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xiahwase May 3 2009, 01:50:52 UTC
sure =3

just added you back ^^

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