AMC--Chapter Thirty-Eight

[dawn_felagund]

In chapter thirty-eight, we return to Tirion to witness the happy (?) reunion between Nolofinwë and Findekano. I'm keeping this chapter at a general rating, although it does contain some sexuality, but nothing graphic.

I had thought that I would have to rewrite the next chapter; as it turns out, the next two chapters are written and safe in my

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[ann_arien]

Yay! It seems I am the first to spot the chapter and comment on it!
Comment on finding it, anyway!

Now I'm off to read it!

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[dawn_felagund]

Yay! Hope you enjoy it. :)

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[ann_arien]

Another excellent chapter and one that was not so chilly and unusual, while being written from Nolofinwe's POV. Remember how you enjoyed the fact that several of your readers warmed up to Nolofinwe after the story finally took his point of view? As opposed to thinking him cold and stiff(pun not intended). Well, I really don't like him. So it was funny to watch Arafinwe going about his merry way and embarassing his older brother with indiscreet questions. And a bit sadistic to see him react to how much Findekano has grown attached to Feanaro's family.

“Do you not recall, Nolofinwë? You gave your permission that I adopt him. He is happier here,” and when I looked at my son-or was he Curufinwë’s?-his eyes weren’t blue like mine anymore but that eerie, bright silver-blue flame-color like his cousin Tyelkormo’s that has always struck me as wicked, like the eyes of a beast in the dark.Brrr! Bad Nolofinwe despite the wonderful description of Feanorian eyes. And I was almost expecting Findekano to get home, have his little reunion with his

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[dawn_felagund]

Well, I really don't like him. So it was funny to watch Arafinwe going about his merry way and embarassing his older brother with indiscreet questions.

He's not very likeable...but I do hope that his reasons for being the way he is shows through. He's jealous and nursing an inferiority complex...and puzzled by being the oldest and the middle son, as frenchpony pointed out in a comment below. I feel bad for him...but he is a sort of bastid. And I love forcing him to interact with Arafinwe. The two are such different characters, and Arafinwe does love digging at Nolofinwe's nerves. Plus, I love Arafinwe.... *huggles him*

In order to bring Nolofinwe to the "full brother in heart" point that you love so much, I have to start him a little low and have him evolve as a character, so I hope you like him more as the story progresses. ;)

And, imagine what it's going to be like for Nolofinwe later, when Aredhel will be old enough to hang out with her cousins and roam the lands with them for days.Lol! True! You have to wonder what went through both

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[ann_arien]

In order to bring Nolofinwe to the "full brother in heart" point that you love so much, I have to start him a little low and have him evolve as a character, so I hope you like him more as the story progresses. ;)

You betcha! I'll follow his evolution with much interest and I look forward to seeing exactly how Nolofinwe is going to stop despising Feany and actually start caring. Because I do believe that Nolofinwe was more than just concerned for his people's well being, while trying to reconcile with his brother. Who knows, maybe Feany did something to earn his half-brother's... affection.

*whistles innocently despite wicked gleam in eyes*

But Felagund's special and knows a hott, red-haired cousin when he sees one.

Whoa! I never thought of that! Hmm... there goes another bunny... Sorry, but I'm so pervy it's practically bubbling out of my ears. >:^P

See, when someone who reads my stuff and knows me as more than an author and as a friend...I think you start to see where some of my ideas come from.He, he! Yea, I tend to remember