AMC--Chapter Fifty-One

Apr 21, 2006 08:33

I have decided to divide the last part of AMC into two posts. It is simply too long for a single posting, and I wish also to tinker a bit with next week's chapter, as there is a rather important event that deserves more attention than I--in the rush of finishing a 350K-word novel--was willing to give it at first ( Read more... )

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rhapsody11 April 21 2006, 15:25:35 UTC
guh...

and Macalaurë emerges, his tunic half unlaced and his chest damp, to join us in the shade.

yeah baby!

and he hasn’t even the chance to finish his thought before Atar is leaping from the ground, tearing his tunic over his head, and racing to tumble into the fountain with his two youngest sons, who shriek with joy

*thud*

tearing off my tunic as I go, and splash into the fountain before remembering that I still wear my boots.

Sweet Eru...

“You are both mad!” comes the shout from Macalaurë, across the garden, but it is only a few minutes before he has joined us,

Are you trying to kill me LOL I need a cold drink, no shower..

Ah and much Tyelko goodness, I especially loved this bit

“Fireflies,” Tyelkormo counters, his voice surprisingly faint, his head outside of the circle, “for they are tangible. Stars are not tangible.” I see a deeper darkness quivering against his shadowy hands, as the moth plays its feather-soft wings against his skin.Not only this visual is great, but the foreshadowing is giving me the chills. The ( ... )

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dawn_felagund April 21 2006, 16:46:11 UTC
Are you trying to kill me LOL I need a cold drink, no shower..

*evol snicker*
*proffers cold drink*

Yes, the fountain part seem to have been quite popular. I think it would provide a nice visual in AMC: The Movie. ;)

Not only this visual is great, but the foreshadowing is giving me the chills. The brief moment between Tyelkormo and Maitimo was just magnificent, Turko slowly starts to stand on his own.

Yep, Turko grows up a lot in this story. :) At the beginning, he only wanted to cling to his father and his Nelyo; now he has started to realize that he is different from them, and that is not necessarily a bad thing. Only he will have to be a bit more independent in order to fully realize his potential.

But, this... oh.. *snif*

I added that this morning too because I didn't like the abrupt ending to that section. I'm glad that I did. :)

And this, oh my Dawn! I need to get to that festival!

You and me both! But we'll get to go next week in the story, at least. ;)

(And next week's chapter is rated adult.... >:^D)

I never thought ( ... )

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rhapsody11 April 21 2006, 22:11:46 UTC
Yes, the fountain part seem to have been quite popular. I think it would provide a nice visual in AMC: The Movie. ;)

Can I get on the pay roll for that? LOL But what you write is a great visual Dawn. The first line about yummy Maglor made my dirty mind all wubble and at the end I had to retrieve it out of the gutter ;)

Yep, Turko grows up a lot in this story. :) At the beginning, he only wanted to cling to his father and his Nelyo; now he has started to realize that he is different from them, and that is not necessarily a bad thing. Only he will have to be a bit more independent in order to fully realize his potential.

Ah yeah, but still, you know :) He's growing up so fast... oh and another thing that made me wonder a bit... Him and dressed up as a deer... with antlers. It made me think about celtic legend about the young stag defeating the old stag when the young stag is old enough... I thought, how typical. It might be far-fetched, so ignore my rambling.

You and me both! But we'll get to go next week in the story, at least. ;) ( ... )

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dawn_felagund April 22 2006, 02:48:45 UTC
It made me think about celtic legend about the young stag defeating the old stag when the young stag is old enough... I thought, how typical. It might be far-fetched, so ignore my rambling.

Hey, I think that's kind of cool. I'm not familiar with Celtic legends, so I'd never heard it before. :)

Check. Hmmm what will you be wearing?

As little as possible.

*AHEM* What I meant to say was maybe just the traditional little black dress? ;)

Oh and I didn't had that much time, but I will get back at you for the comments on the other chapters... o.O..

That's okay 'cause I'm still catching up on yours too! It's been a busy week, but I'm looking forward to a long, leisurely weekend with some catch-up time. :)

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rhapsody11 April 27 2006, 20:34:39 UTC
Hey, I think that's kind of cool. I'm not familiar with Celtic legends, so I'd never heard it before. :)

Well, you see there is the Bard part of me surfacing ;) It's really interesting.

*AHEM* What I meant to say was maybe just the traditional little black dress? ;)

A Carni's babysit ;) If he goes as a shadow... ;c) The perfect excuse to whoops end up in Nelyo's lap LOL

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