*flops over*
Done...the second editing round of Searching. X____X And yep, the first part of Searching is going to be better edited than the second part. Which is why when I start the third round (tomorrow, probably/hopefully) I'm going to be starting the editing at chapter nine. XD;;
One rather bad inconsistency I found was the fact that Marland was shocked when Kendal had deduced what the heck had happened to Marland and Ronthar - except he'd told her, not once, but twice what had happened earlier. XDD;;; Whoops.
It's currently at 99,362 words. Pfffffft. I do have one scene to put in but I don't think it'll be that long.
8D CUTE!
One rather bad inconsistency I found was the fact that Marland was shocked when Kendal had deduced what the heck had happened to Marland and Ronthar - except he'd told her, not once, but twice what had happened earlier. XDD;;; Whoops.
It's currently at 99,362 words. Pfffffft. I do have one scene to put in but I don't think it'll be that long.
Click to view8D CUTE!