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Oh jeez, just had three-and-a-half hours straight of nothing to do at the receptionist volunteering. XD The administrator is away so I didn't have a list of tasks to do.
So I wrote Reset. Which was a little hard when I haven't really looked at the second chapter. It kinda showed when I had to tweak a couple of things because they'd already been said in the previous scene. XD;;
I switched Sunshine's pov to Kenshin's, because I don't think the way the scene was before was really working.
I still ship Kenshin and Sunshine and it shows here. :3
Guh. I have three guys in the one scene (in Kenshin's pov) and since Kenshin doesn't identify with 'Kenshin' I have 'he's flying all over the place. @____@ Some scenes are going to be so confusing.
There's a funny role reversing going on, and it's the second time it's happened. :3
I have totally lost Lan's voice. I'm sort of mixing in LSK's formal and big words style.
I wrote 700 words! :D :D
So I wrote Reset. Which was a little hard when I haven't really looked at the second chapter. It kinda showed when I had to tweak a couple of things because they'd already been said in the previous scene. XD;;
I switched Sunshine's pov to Kenshin's, because I don't think the way the scene was before was really working.
I still ship Kenshin and Sunshine and it shows here. :3
Guh. I have three guys in the one scene (in Kenshin's pov) and since Kenshin doesn't identify with 'Kenshin' I have 'he's flying all over the place. @____@ Some scenes are going to be so confusing.
There's a funny role reversing going on, and it's the second time it's happened. :3
I have totally lost Lan's voice. I'm sort of mixing in LSK's formal and big words style.
I wrote 700 words! :D :D