OneShot - JaeMin - This is how love at first sight happens!

[deftonsita]

This is how love at first sight happens!
Thanks to: pinkfluffies
A/N: dedicated to evangellie so she can take this wish out of her list.
"... A good friend of mine told me once:
“Go out and take a walk and that way, you will meet the love of your life…”
Let me tell you that I’ve doing that for a long time and I haven’t found anyone."

Comments

[evangellie]

FIIIIRST :P

[EDIT]
*glooomps* XD So! Yoochun is totally Cupid, the narrator? XD Also I like your idea, it's cute and an original way of doing a cliché.

his pink cell phone
I like the details here and there. And this one in particular.

if love means having only one girlfriend and holding her hand is the third base
XDDDDDDDD

The ending was quite mean but we don't know if Jaejoong will have a change of heart, do we?

Also. There are quite a lot of mistakes. Need beta?

Me likes! &hearts

(A looooot! Too cute. >_<)

[deftonsita]

YAY u were first! haha *gives cookies for that*

uh, nope, Yoochun is not cupid hehehe~. And thanks! i'm glad you liked the idea :3.

i can totally see Jae with a pink cellphone, i think that it goes with his personality haha.

Maybe Changmin can keep him forever, maybe he would get hurt in that relationship but maybe their love would be strong enougth to keep them together~ who knows?

LOL yes! D: XD, sorry about that

and i'm glad you like it :D.

[evangellie]

<333

It's alright. <3

(Want me to write something in addition to the one of the angels/devils that is not going right in my head... I will finish it. I promise. :P

[deftonsita]

ZOMG! i walmost forgot that request!! yes yes!! i want me wants!! X3

[onew]

heehee. this was cute. :D
there were a few typo errors here and there, but it's generally nice. you were able to capture the emotion of "love at first sight".
gah. i can't get over how cute this piece is. :D keep it up! :D

[deftonsita]

Thanks for reading! i'm glad you like it :D.
Actually i wasn't sure i could capture that emotion but i guess that i... did a good try?

[theresa_lynne]

That was just adorable. I loved the way you worded it. Awww... I was sad you wouldn't take us any further, though. D:

XDDD

[deftonsita]

Wee~! glad you like it.
I was sad you wouldn't take us any further, though. D:
haha *pokes* stalker, anyone? sorry about that, but i just wanted to give some privacity to JaeMin :3

thanks for reading and for your comment!

[murderfanta]

XD
that's cute *O*
And very original hehe ~
Simple and original, just what I needed ♥
JaeMin *_______________*

[deftonsita]

Simple and original, just what I needed ♥
thanks! i'm glad that you found what you needed in this story haha

[sirenasfun]

I absolutely LOVE the way you wrote this! It's absolutely adorable!

[deftonsita]

Thanks! i'm glad you like it
and is the first time that i write like this, i wasn't sure if i could make it with my english skills haha