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OneShot - JaeMin - This is how love at first sight happens!

Nov 21, 2007 10:43

This is how love at first sight happens!
Thanks to: pinkfluffies
A/N: dedicated to evangellie so she can take this wish out of her list.
"... A good friend of mine told me once:
“Go out and take a walk and that way, you will meet the love of your life…”
Let me tell you that I’ve doing that for a long time and I haven’t found anyone."

( Fallow me if you want to see )

!language: english, paring: jaejoong/changmin, +section: requests, *fandom: dbsk

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evangellie November 21 2007, 18:50:30 UTC

FIIIIRST :P

[EDIT]
*glooomps* XD So! Yoochun is totally Cupid, the narrator? XD Also I like your idea, it's cute and an original way of doing a cliché.

his pink cell phone
I like the details here and there. And this one in particular.

if love means having only one girlfriend and holding her hand is the third base
XDDDDDDDD

The ending was quite mean but we don't know if Jaejoong will have a change of heart, do we?

Also. There are quite a lot of mistakes. Need beta?

Me likes! &hearts

(A looooot! Too cute. >_<)

deftonsita November 22 2007, 21:38:46 UTC

YAY u were first! haha *gives cookies for that*

uh, nope, Yoochun is not cupid hehehe~. And thanks! i'm glad you liked the idea :3.

i can totally see Jae with a pink cellphone, i think that it goes with his personality haha.

Maybe Changmin can keep him forever, maybe he would get hurt in that relationship but maybe their love would be strong enougth to keep them together~ who knows?

LOL yes! D: XD, sorry about that

and i'm glad you like it :D.

evangellie November 24 2007, 11:19:08 UTC

<333

It's alright. <3

(Want me to write something in addition to the one of the angels/devils that is not going right in my head... I will finish it. I promise. :P

deftonsita November 24 2007, 22:05:38 UTC

ZOMG! i walmost forgot that request!! yes yes!! i want me wants!! X3

evangellie November 24 2007, 22:44:22 UTC

Yeah... I OMG so sloooowwww. If you want something else, tell me a prompt. ^^

deftonsita November 24 2007, 22:52:09 UTC

haha, i actually can't remember the prompt that i give you, only that it had something to do with angels and devils... want me to make a better prompt?

evangellie November 24 2007, 23:05:24 UTC

The one with angels and devils is allright but if you have another prompt that you would like better, you can tell me. ^^

deftonsita November 24 2007, 23:22:07 UTC

uh no no!! :D!! the jaemin angels/devils prompt has to stay!! 8D! that's the only one that i want! X3!!
and can u add some Yunho/YooChun too? :3
now that i remember Jae and Junsu where going to be the devils, Yunho and Changmin angels and Yoochun a fallen angel, right?

evangellie November 26 2007, 17:20:13 UTC

Okaaay. XD
I'll... try? XD
I think so. I've to reread the notes and the beginning (I wrote something but meeeh. I've a bit of a writer's block...)

deftonsita November 26 2007, 17:32:06 UTC

I'll... try? XD
take the doubt out of that phrase! you will do it! 8D
haha xD, and i'll be "patiently" waiting

uhg! you are in a writers block? and right now i'm obsessed with writing , can't stop my head from thinking and i'm drowning by every second... srsly @_@

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