029: & you belong with me.
For dongbangsuju20, my sweet Belial, who's birthday was today & who asked me for a fluffy Mika/Jay piece...and since I really have a soft-spot for Jay though Karam is slowly working his way up on my bias list too OTL ...I wrote this for her. :)
Bby, you can consider this a sort-of sequel to don't call it puppy love -- because I wrote the last part with the ( Read more... )
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so you already sent me the beginning on twitter and omg I really love it ♥
you described jay so perfectly and and with beautiful words <3
the way you wrote this fic was a bit unusual but it attracted me after a few sentences :D
I really like it now <3
(Jihwan didn’t realize then that he was falling in love - but the way his mind and his heart felt like it was all coming together so perfectly told him that he was moving toward something good.)
i love this sentence ♥
Because the way Suhoon held his pride close made Jihwan realize just how much he wanted to be like the leader, standing tall in the face of adversity and making even the simplest of motion elegant.
aw, this is so true. especially with suhoon being elegant and helding his pride close haha. I love your characterization. <3
Then again, Jihwan couldn’t complain - not when Suhoon pinched his cheeks until his eyes snapped open and, at his tired groan of protest, the older boy laughed with his mouth wide open in such an unrestrained ( ... )
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dksjf;aosngp Your comments are always more than decent, bb - what are you talking about?? ;;;;
Hehehe I did, I did -- but you see how I've continued from there, right? *^^* Ahhhh it makes me happy to hear you liked this characterization of Jay...I thought something a little less "simple" and "straightforward" (which is how he's normally portrayed/seen) would be a nice change of pace...
Oh, and I see you caught my more "experimental" style!! I tried out a slightly different style of writing this time, yes...it sometimes flows a bit better with my thoughts this way, so I hope you don't mind... ;; Well, it doesn't seem like you minded, but--yeah, thank you for letting me know you didn't mind it! *^*//
Awww, thank you, dear. ♥ Love can be so intangible sometimes, right? :") I always picture Jay as the type who feels through his instincts and his hunches -- so I thought that would be the best way to word it...
Criessss Mika is always so hard for me to get sometimes, so I'm really glad to hear that!! TTTTb He's a lot like a quieter ( ... )
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