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May 07, 2006 12:10

Title: Choices (2/?) Safe
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zoe/jayne, choices, fic

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capnzoe May 7 2006, 19:52:20 UTC
*pouts* I wish a muscle-bound mercenary would play me a song! It's a sweet series...I like that Zoe doesn't just fall into his arms, that it's going to take some time for her to fully commit herself to him. It shows her respect for Wash and her seriousness about her own emotions.

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damn_hero_zoe May 7 2006, 20:04:45 UTC
*sigh* Yes, it would be nice to have a "muscle-bound mercenary" to play his guitar for me.

I'm glad that you see that she isn't falling right into his arms. I'm not a hundred percent sure where this series is going, but I'm glad you like it and I'm glad that you see her seriousness with regard to her emotions. She's cautious and rightly so. I love Zoe. :D

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capnzoe May 7 2006, 20:10:55 UTC
Oh yeah, regarding the beta, I've never done it before, but I'm sure I could beta for your Zayne if you'd like. Just let me know exactly what you're looking for. I'm assuming it's general editing. I'm always here to help a fellow Zayne lover.

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capnzoe May 7 2006, 20:12:43 UTC
PS - there's just something about this scence on your background after Zoe slits that guy's throat. Not the killing part but the way she stands there after she kills him. It's damn sexy!

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damn_hero_zoe May 7 2006, 20:13:34 UTC
I KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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razycrandomgirl May 8 2006, 02:57:07 UTC
When I saw that ... I think I came! lol Then there was Jewel and Alan's commentary. Jewel's like "Whoooooooa!" That was just as bad ass as the River\Reaver scene, with the fire in the back ground! Speaking of which, does anyone know where I can get that one?

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damn_hero_zoe May 7 2006, 20:13:00 UTC
Thank you, hun. I just want to make sure that my grammer is okay and that I have no glaring spelling errors and typos. Just another set of eyes to look it over. Why don't you drop me an email at irishwaters86@gmail.com and I'll give you some more details and such. Thanks for volenteering. :D (p.s. you like the new layout?)

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