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May 07, 2009 22:25

I know you're all writing BBB. I'm not, since I've been stupidly busy all semester...until now ( Read more... )

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cynthia_arrow May 8 2009, 16:01:35 UTC
Those top two are my main goals, but the Spencer/his bandmates story just... I don't know, it just doesn't seem right, and I don't know how to make it right. Basically, the bulk of the story's scenes are 1) immediately post-breakup, before he starts "dating" them or 2) Spencer + Ryan/Keltie or Spencer + Jon/Cassie. Brendon's always lurking in the background, as his friend, but I know know know I haven't earned the sexy payoff for them at the end. But in attempting to insert more sense of their sexual tension and the reason they've never acted on it, I've injected so much backstory that it's unwieldy...and still, perhaps, doesn't help me earn the Brendon/Spencer. *hands*

I think I'm getting the genderswap story sorted, though. And since people seem to want to see it, that's what I'm working on now.

(The Johnson thing is admittedly weird, as he is the least written about and potentially least objectively hot of the Cab boys, but for some reason those things appealed to me. Plus, he's apparently sort of a sarcastic little fucker, and I'm all about Brendon's sharper side lately. When, um, he's not being a cuddly little failboat.)

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