IT'S HERE, IT'S HERE! (sara your birthday is gay christmas!)
i know you already know how i feel this is perfect, but let me expand on that.
NIALL!!!!! he's just so niall throughout all of this-- unashamedly curious and unapologetic for what he wants and needs, but with a raw honesty and vulnerability that makes him so endearing, all the things that make the other boys respond to him so well. i'm so pleased that this was all his pov, that you were deliberate and careful and successful with that, because i cannot imagine it working SO well like this from another perspective
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*falls onto your lap* Thank you again for the encouragement as I was writing it! It definitely helped to know that you were excited as I frantically threw all my feelings at my computer and hoped they coalesced into something story-shaped. \o
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me and my sister were reading it at the same time on different computers, and we kept skyping each other funny lines from this fic, because holy crap this was fantastic.
i would quote all my favorite lines and such, but that would be way too long of a comment. (wait- shout out for the 'a cow- or a murderer, the jury's still out on that one' cause my sister has laughingly repeated it to me three times already).
like this fic is going to be one of those fics that i can read and reread and never get sick of. (also reading this fic has taken me away from writing my angsty niall/harry genderswap fic and i don't think i'm going to be able to write something sad after i read something so funny, so i fully expect an apology for the brilliant-ness of your writing)
Aw that's so cute, thank you! I'm so glad you guys liked it. <3 Frankly I just encourage you to write all the Niall/Harry in the world tbh, they are the best!! Go! Do it!
What a wonderful thing to wake up to! The humor was wonderful and NIALL! I don't have a feel for him yet, but I hope he is just like this in real life. :-)
Ohhhhhh this is really lovely. I'm sort of just gazing happily at my screen now, ngl. I have a lot of things to do today but this fic really sucked me in, and I couldn't help just putting things aside in order to finish it. It's just so SWEET, they're all so sweet with each other, and it regularly made me giggle, and I love your Niall voice, and the porn was hot, and. It's just so adorable somehow, the way they go about the whole thing, and the bits about them wanting to get an apartment together and a huge bed just made my heart melt. Ack I don't have time to go through everything I loved, but I will say that Harry's insistence on consent and his feelings on virginity were definitely a favourite. And also everything about the time they spent at the bungalow, augh, FEELS. ♥
Thank you!! This story sort of took me over for a little while there, so I'm glad it grabbed you as well. :D I am just a sucker for a big implied happy ending, I mean they just seem so sweet and happy and I wanted to reflect that in the story. Glad you liked Harry, it actually cracked me up to write that aspect of him because in my past fandoms I've definitely always liked an element of dubcon (wooo kink!) but I was just like yeah no come on, this is Harry Styles we're talking about here. I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for commenting! ♥
He realizes that he can no longer pick a favorite.
Ahhh I'm always reminded of my soft spot for Nialler at times like these and there really should be more fic with his voice because he is adorable and sweet and kinda a pervert without meaning to be, especially in this lol. I didn't expect to have any feels after reading this but I HAVE ALL OF THEM, ALL THE FEELS. This is proper OT5 action because whilst its got its pairing moments, they worked like an absolute treat as a fivesome here. I love your attention to canon details too with Louis getting stung and the stay at the bungalow and that Twitcam omg...basically, this is a lovely, hot, endearing fic. :D ♥
PS Happy birthday! By now you probably deserve a lot of someone elses writing fic for you, heh.
Man, I think I got into this fandom and cycled through every member being my favorite and then just landed on Niall and hung on for dear life. Most of my story ideas are Niall-centric, because Niall. (Okay I just deleted a bunch of gushing about Niall, but there was some here jsyk.) I'm glad this gave you feels because the whole thing was basically me being emotionally overwhelmed by this band and then translating that to words and trying to show how it would all work, the five of them. I'm so glad you caught all the canon bits because the Twitcam thing was actually what inspired this fic - I saw that and then sort of ran around like "but how?! but how did they get from being put together as a band to Niall asking if they can all have sex in like, a month? how? how? HOW?" and then doing my damnedest to write how.
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i know you already know how i feel this is perfect, but let me expand on that.
NIALL!!!!! he's just so niall throughout all of this-- unashamedly curious and unapologetic for what he wants and needs, but with a raw honesty and vulnerability that makes him so endearing, all the things that make the other boys respond to him so well. i'm so pleased that this was all his pov, that you were deliberate and careful and successful with that, because i cannot imagine it working SO well like this from another perspective ( ... )
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me and my sister were reading it at the same time on different computers, and we kept skyping each other funny lines from this fic, because holy crap this was fantastic.
i would quote all my favorite lines and such, but that would be way too long of a comment. (wait- shout out for the 'a cow- or a murderer, the jury's still out on that one' cause my sister has laughingly repeated it to me three times already).
like this fic is going to be one of those fics that i can read and reread and never get sick of. (also reading this fic has taken me away from writing my angsty niall/harry genderswap fic and i don't think i'm going to be able to write something sad after i read something so funny, so i fully expect an apology for the brilliant-ness of your writing)
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Ahhh I'm always reminded of my soft spot for Nialler at times like these and there really should be more fic with his voice because he is adorable and sweet and kinda a pervert without meaning to be, especially in this lol. I didn't expect to have any feels after reading this but I HAVE ALL OF THEM, ALL THE FEELS. This is proper OT5 action because whilst its got its pairing moments, they worked like an absolute treat as a fivesome here. I love your attention to canon details too with Louis getting stung and the stay at the bungalow and that Twitcam omg...basically, this is a lovely, hot, endearing fic. :D ♥
PS Happy birthday! By now you probably deserve a lot of someone elses writing fic for you, heh.
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Thank you darling! ♥
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