Anybody out there good at action sequences?

[cybermathwitch]

And/or writing "around" action sequences instead of writing the literal action therein

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[allisnow]

Woo!

I'm on page 99. That's in Calibri 10 point font. And Jane has decided to invite herself into the story completely without my permission. And she wants to TALK.

[cybermathwitch]

Oh, sweet zombie crickets I hate when that happens. Except when it makes the story better (and doesn't it usually? Sigh) and then I kind of have to give it a free pass to come frak with me. ;) But yay, because I <3 Jane!

Also that is an awesome .gif

[allisnow]

The problem is I don't really know if it's going to make it better or not! I have to write it first! *weeps*

Also that is an awesome .gif

It is, it really is.